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striker
27-02-2007, 18:41
Name: Suterusu Keishi (Stealth Execution)

Rank: S (kinjutsu)

Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu

Fighting Style: Physical

Range: Close

Element: Lightning

Village Origin: Hyouga

Description: The main idea of the jutsu is to move at extremely high speeds, dragging the opponent with you to wind/immobilize from pressure, and then send high voltage electricity into their body.

Explanation on how: By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. At this point the user must use his muscles past their normal limit to get to a speed where they can no longer be seen, and move faster then they can be heard (or rather the sound would lag behind).

Once that is achieved the user will begin to release electrical charges from his body into the air around him causing the air to crackle and spark until an electrical field begins to form, while at the same time attempting to stun and wind the opponent with electrified strikes to the body at the extreme speed while still running by.

When enough electrical energy is built up and the opponent has been stunned/hit enough, The user will grab the opponent in what ever way is easiest to them, and push the muscles harder to push them at the same speed as the user in order to both wind and immobilize them, as Their body’s wouldn’t be used to the force and pressure.

The electricity the user emits will then pour into the opponent sending high voltage shocks coursing through them to paralyze/damage them internally, before dragging them into the air, and as the opponent become electrically charged, the opponents body will act as a catalyst in conjunction with the charges below to form an enormous blast of lightning capable of striking down the opponent as well as damaging the user.

The opponent can be killed for many reasons from this, whether the speed and pressure collapses their lungs, or bones crack and splinter into the blood stream, or the target’s heart stops from the electrical shock, or internal damage from the electricity to other vital organs.

The opponent how ever will suffer the most damage, already being electrified, as well as being the main catalyst but the blast will also take its toll on the user. During this technique most of the user's muscles will snap, his body will be burned and singed from friction and rogue electrical charges, and his stamina will be severely drained.

As well even though this technique has a lot of steps, the time interval in which this happens is extremely short due to the speeds. As well, it lessens the stamina/chakra drain if Raiko is in stage 3 of his bloodline, and the electrical components become easier to control, but heavy damage will still be sustained either way and the Muscles will still be damaged.

This technique cannot be used more then once a month, unless the body is some how repaired with the aid of extremely skilled medical nin, in which case it may be possible to use once more depending on the after condition of the body, though each additional time will cause the muscles to be wrecked worse then the time before and maybe even beyond repair, thus hampering Raiko's normal speeds for at least a month if not longer.

Ways to escape it: Yes there are ways… But I ain’t giving you all the answers. After all, rp fighting is partially about reading everything that’s going on, and noticing all aspects. You can’t just expect all the answers to be given to you after all haha, be creative and think. Though I’ve told a mod or two a few weaknesses just to prove to them there are some~ just think of what’s “needed” so to speak, that may not necessarily be mentioned. If you have any intellect you’ll figure out the major weaknesses heh.

Creator: Kazeruki, Raiko

Training Time: 2 weeks to master high speeds
1 Week to master unlocking the first gate
1 Week to master the added speed with the gate
1 Week to master the hold/electric charging with the speed

Side notes: Only three people could even come close to using this jutsu and still survive after such speed, From what Raiko has seen, himself being one.

Itoko
27-02-2007, 20:21
This is nothing more then a stronger version of Chidori.

"The electricity the user emits will then pour into the opponent sending high voltage shocks coursing through them to paralyze/damage them internally, before dragging them into the air, and as the opponent become electrically charged, the opponents body will act as a catalyst in conjunction with the charges below to form an enormous blast of lightning capable of striking down the opponent as well as damaging the user."

That is Chidori. Enough said.

striker
27-02-2007, 20:27
not really. by that logic anything involving electricity is chidori.

the final thing is a bolt of lightning for one thing. a bolt of lightning that hits both people is not chidori. Shocking someone with electricity trying to paralyze is not chidori...

turning your arm into basically a blade of lightning and putting it through your opponent at high speed ripping a hole through/into them, THAT is chidori.

DrunkSKkid
27-02-2007, 20:37
You said this right? - user will begin to release electrical charges from his body into the air around him causing the air to crackle and spark until an electrical field begins to form

Do you mean similiar to Sasuke's jutsu? Chidori Nagashi (One thousand birds current) covering the user with electricity?

And also, - By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. At this point the user must use his muscles past their normal limit to get to a speed where they can no longer be seen, and move faster then they can be heard

The sound only just lagged behind for rock lee at three gates...And to be able to move faster than the speed of sound, that would require a very high intake of oxygen just to keep the lactic acid to a sustainable level, therefore requiring three gates about (skin turns red, higher oxygen intake)

I can think of a few weaknesses. if you wanted to hear what I thought, then just say I can PM you, I'm nowhere near your level, I'm not even in the RPG yet. Even with the weaknesses which I think I found, the opponent will still come off bad wouldnt s/he?

Anyway, that move would need hell of alot of concentration.

Does it still have the elemental weakness? Could you put that down?

striker
27-02-2007, 20:50
no not like current, it is just electrifying the atmosphere, which will later be used to basically summon the bolt of lightning. it actually does nothing other then help create the later lightning bolt.,

and thats all well and good for rock lee, but i'm a jounin who in essence is way faster then rock lee, with speed from natural and bloodline catagories so i would essentially have to unlock less gates then him, especially since my body is used to intense speeds anyways. and hence why i also have to train for atleast a week to adjust to the speeds.

as for elemental weaknesses i suppose it would still be effected, though if the move is pulled off to the point i'm using the lightning like that, it will be hard to get a wind counter in time. not impossible.. but hard

DrunkSKkid
27-02-2007, 20:56
I suppose so...

Hah...You're basically Gai, but a genius form =P

Wouldnt you still have to undergo rigorous training? It will strain and eventually tear muscles using chakra gates...

Water moves could also weaken your attack right? unless you carry bags of salt...

Shinkon
27-02-2007, 21:00
This seems ok, although it could only be used against missing-nin and those who give consent to be killed. It fits with your bloodline too.

I give it an OK

striker
28-02-2007, 03:10
well, if me and the opponent were wet if anything that would just... make us even more lightning conductors.

and thats why my training time is like... 5 weeks easy, and you already have to be great at speed taijutsu anyways. And i only open the first gate, but yes i said it tears the muscles regardless. And any additional training would only lessen the strain.

and thanks shinkon ^^ though if i used it on others, i'm not saying it would for sure kill them... but they definatly won't be moving after, i'd prolly destroy of their muscles/body, and weaken their heart maybe, but not as definite kill. If they are giving consent, or a missing nin then it will be able to kill, other wise they can stay alive just... ya laying there unconcious maybe?

jameshawking
28-02-2007, 03:30
>.> -pokes how electrical charges that are released into the air are nearlyu instantaneously diffused and minimized, resulting in barely any electricity for the lightningbolt- D:

striker
28-02-2007, 03:52
isn't that why i said the actual time this whole thing takes place in a very small time? thats the whole speed thing rememeber... besides, chakra lightning will stick around a little longer, as far as i'm concerned haha

Nekomata Kayangelus
28-02-2007, 04:32
Name: Suterusu Keishi (Stealth Execution)

Stealth doesn't really fit, but oh, well...


Description: The main idea of the jutsu is to move at extremely high speeds, dragging the opponent with you to wind/immobilize from pressure, and then send high voltage electricity into their body.

So, if they are immobilised, they basically wrap around you? That is at least what would happen at the speed you are going...


Explanation on how: By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. At this point the user must use his muscles past their normal limit to get to a speed where they can no longer be seen, and move faster then they can be heard (or rather the sound would lag behind).

You are going super sonic? Remember to take into account, that the lagging of sound will be in the form of an explosion that goes "boom", due to sound being condensed. Also, if aimed right, this sound can cause defness...


Once that is achieved the user will begin to release electrical charges from his body into the air around him causing the air to crackle and spark until an electrical field begins to form, while at the same time attempting to stun and wind the opponent with electrified strikes to the body at the extreme speed while still running by.

This would cause you to be located inside a very strong magnetic field. Which means, every metal in the area would home in on you, making it where once you finish the jutsu, if there are any sharp objects about, either you, or your opponent will end up with holes in them.


When enough electrical energy is built up and the opponent has been stunned/hit enough, The user will grab the opponent in what ever way is easiest to them, and push the muscles harder to push them at the same speed as the user in order to both wind and immobilize them, as Their body’s wouldn’t be used to the force and pressure.

Just as a note, this means you can't push them, only pull them. If you pushed them, their limbs would at first be stationary, which would result in you running into them at full speed. In short, it would be like getting kicked/hit by a super sonic punch. Your bones wouldn't last.


The electricity the user emits will then pour into the opponent sending high voltage shocks coursing through them to paralyze/damage them internally, before dragging them into the air, and as the opponent become electrically charged, the opponents body will act as a catalyst in conjunction with the charges below to form an enormous blast of lightning capable of striking down the opponent as well as damaging the user.

You mean electrical currunt. Electricity going into them, means you are pumping electrons into them. In that case, the lightning would be coming out of the opponent, and only the user would be damaged.


The opponent can be killed for many reasons from this, whether the speed and pressure collapses their lungs, or bones crack and splinter into the blood stream, or the target’s heart stops from the electrical shock, or internal damage from the electricity to other vital organs.

The first gate, which is the only thing affected here, only influences the muscles for moving your limbs. So, you would be just as likely to have your lungs collapse, or bones crack as your opponent.


This technique cannot be used more then once a month, unless the body is some how repaired with the aid of extremely skilled medical nin, in which case it may be possible to use once more depending on the after condition of the body, though each additional time will cause the muscles to be wrecked worse then the time before and maybe even beyond repair, thus hampering Raiko's normal speeds for at least a month if not longer.

If it hurts you badly, that it can't be used for one full month, it would be quite obvious, movement would be harder/slower for a while. How much would your speed be lowered by afterwards? Enough that it can't be used unless it is a 1 on 1 match? Or could you still out perform a chuunin afterwards?


Ways to escape it: Yes there are ways… But I ain’t giving you all the answers. After all, rp fighting is partially about reading everything that’s going on, and noticing all aspects. You can’t just expect all the answers to be given to you after all haha, be creative and think. Though I’ve told a mod or two a few weaknesses just to prove to them there are some~ just think of what’s “needed” so to speak, that may not necessarily be mentioned. If you have any intellect you’ll figure out the major weaknesses heh.

Just out of curiosity, would these "ways to escape" be what sounds logical, or what would be possible based on science.


Side notes: Only three people could even come close to using this jutsu and still survive after such speed, From what Raiko has seen, himself being one.

You know, you might want to list all the people who are actually able to learn this. The fact that it requires only first gate means person already has to have super insane speed. So, even if someone is a Jounin, you couldn't teach it to them...

striker
28-02-2007, 05:11
you make such a long post, i hate reading long posts...

A) stealth, is suppossed to represent the fact i'm like... undetectable, with my speed. or supposedly anyways.

B) Depends on how i'm actually grabbing them at the time, but it's possible.

C) It's doesnt nessisarily have to be scientific, it IS naruto after all... so what may happen in reality may not have to occur here >.>

D) It doesnt mean that at all. lightning jutsu are generally created with the whole electrical charges, and do you see them creating magnetism? besides, here magnetism is a earth/lightning jutsu fusion, and the electric charges is part of chakra/jutsu which is lightning based.

E)Well it's not like they are a wall, and it's not to say going fast prevents you from picking up a stationary object that you could prolly pick up.

F) either way you knew what i ment, geez XD enough with the science dude. I HATE science.

G)you know there is a reason why i said i have to train using that speed, in order to get my body to adjust gradually at moving that fast. i'm saying it can happen to other's as... how many people would be naturally used to that hmm?

H) I can lower that time if you'd like to make more sense ^^ i did that to be fair. and the month anyways is more to be safe, from doing permanent damage. yes my speed will be a bit lower, but mostly it will just cause sever pain to try and use my normal speeds that i would in a fight, unless i do severely damage it. and yes i could prolly out perform a chunnin still, and what does a 1 on 1 fight change? And the whole speed hampering part in the end there, was mainly if i used it repeatedly and REALLY destroyed them.

I) your obsessed with science in a fictional based game >.> naruto logic i suppose.

J) So far, the people i can think of that have such a speed are juniko, renato and raiko. happy? Besides. i'm not teaching anyone >.>... it's my trump card and my trade mark XD

Aeterno
28-02-2007, 07:10
*flails at neko for whining*
You already know the impossibilities in the jutsu are filled up with the magic of chakra. Discarding physics is fine as long as it was a conscious decision to do so.

High yield, high recoil move. Typical S rank nuke so to speak.

There are ways around it, and with the muscles snapping he'd be pretty much screwed if the opponent manages to avoid the lightning strike at the end (which is actually possible)

We're just waiting for Kiro to have a shot at it I think >.>

Kiro Vassago
28-02-2007, 07:21
Good stuff

Aeterno
28-02-2007, 13:43
Since Kiro doesn't want to bother.

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