[S-rank Med] Sanctuary (Raiyu)

[kyubichan]

Name: Sanctuary

Rank: S

Type: Ninjutsu

Fighting Style: Passive

Range: Long

Element: Suiton

Village Origin: Hyouga

Description:


This jutsu allows Raiyu to summon a massive rain cloud, up to 100 meters in diameter.
The water from the rain cloud becomes the medium for his Healing or Killing chakra.
Sanctuary's Healing/Killing Rain is chakra-generated, that is, the effect won't remain if the water from the cloud is carried away from the area (it will become regular water).
Only one kind of chakra/rain can be used at a time: Healing or Killing-
Healing Rain instantly heals minor wounds such as scrapes, 1st degree burns, light gashes and shallow cuts. It must touch the tissue that needs to be healed.
Healing Rain heals large wounds over a period of time (Needs 1 hour or 5 posts to take full effect; must touch the tissue that needs to be healed).
Injuries that require invasive procedure such as surgery can only be healed if the rain water is put in the afflicted area.
Killing Rain slowly suppresses the ability to use chakra and also induces fatigue on anyone caught in it, resulting to Low Stamina, Low Chakra Pool, Low Agility or Low Speed (Needs 1 hour or 5 posts to take full effect; Effects linger for 3 posts after getting out of the rain; Afflicted can choose which stat to lower EXCEPT if that stat is already below average or lower for any other reason; must come in skin contact to take effect).
Killing Rain does not affect its source, which is Raiyu.
Raiyu cannot use any other jutsu while using Sanctuary, but he can still move and the rain cloud will move with him.


Maximum Post Duration per use of Sanctuary: 10 posts

Creator: Raiyu

Training Time: 13 days

** This is a signature med-nin jutsu and so only Raiyu will ever have it. I'd appreciate it if no one made something similar to this (healing/killing rain), in whatever rank, but feel free to create versions for different elements.

** Not sure if he can have it at this point (Jounin) but the med jutsu list wasn't specific about the rank for "signature med jutsu".

[kajowwojak]

Nooooot to be a spoil sport but I do have a couple questions myself.

1) Will she be able to still move and fight while using either version of this jutsu?
2) Will healing rain possibly effect her enemies, and if not, how will it deferinciate?
3) Will killing rain effect her allies (not her, I saw that, and it is reasonable), and if not, how will it deferinciate?
4) Will this rain be able to save someones life from a fatal wound, such one that surgery probably wouldn't save them still? (If applied as directed in your description)
5) There is no number five.

Just things to think about. I dont think I really have too much sway in the things, but they are still thoughts.

[kyubichan]

Nooooot to be a spoil sport but I do have a couple questions myself.

1) Will she be able to still move and fight while using either version of this jutsu?
2) Will healing rain possibly effect her enemies, and if not, how will it deferinciate?
3) Will killing rain effect her allies (not her, I saw that, and it is reasonable), and if not, how will it deferinciate?
4) Will this rain be able to save someones life from a fatal wound, such one that surgery probably wouldn't save them still? (If applied as directed in your description)
5) There is no number five.

Just things to think about. I dont think I really have too much sway in the things, but they are still thoughts.

1. Move, yes. Fight, it depends. Higher ranked jutsu require more concentration, right? Raiyu could fight but if concentration gets too low, the S-rank will stop working.
2. The effect is the same.
3. The effect is the same (tough luck huh?)
4. Possibly, depending on the measures taken to treat said wound. By itself, the rain can't do that since all it does is heal what it touches, that is, to repair the damaged area and it takes quite a while. Now if someone ran around with a fatal would, they're more likely to die from trauma or blood loss even if the rain is healing them.
5. Raiyu is a guy =]

[kajowwojak]

Okay, okay, my bad with the gender mix up. Names are so hard nowadays >.<

alright: Can one possibly escape the negative effects of the rain if the were to, say, have an umbrella?

2) And I understand it is chakra in the water that makes it work, not the water itself... but at what point does this seperate? If someone were to be wearing armor, the rain would eventually make its way in and get to the person inside, but at that point would they still be effected by it?

3) What effect will this jutsu have on poisons?

The answer is probably already in there, but I have problems reading sometimes, so sorry for that.

Otherwise... I see the point of the jutsu, but it only will seem to work if your allies can kill your opponents fast (as in no stale mates) (For the healing rain), or your allies have a way to escape the negative effects (or atleast stall so that the opponents get the negative effects of the rain first)

and I think asking a buffer time between S rank jutsu is redundant...

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

@kajo: I'm guessing that basically if there was a jutsu that, say, sucked chakra out of water that would make the two separate. But you are going to need some sort of chakra propelled device.

Also, since it says the water is a medium, avoiding water = avoiding effects.

at least that is how it would work based on the current description...

[kyubichan]

Okay, okay, my bad with the gender mix up. Names are so hard nowadays >.<

alright: Can one possibly escape the negative effects of the rain if the were to, say, have an umbrella?

2) And I understand it is chakra in the water that makes it work, not the water itself... but at what point does this seperate? If someone were to be wearing armor, the rain would eventually make its way in and get to the person inside, but at that point would they still be effected by it?

3) What effect will this jutsu have on poisons?

The answer is probably already in there, but I have problems reading sometimes, so sorry for that.

Otherwise... I see the point of the jutsu, but it only will seem to work if your allies can kill your opponents fast (as in no stale mates) (For the healing rain), or your allies have a way to escape the negative effects (or atleast stall so that the opponents get the negative effects of the rain first)

and I think asking a buffer time between S rank jutsu is redundant...

Don't worry about it, you can ask anything as long as it's about the jutsu.

1. If it's a very big umbrella, sure~ xD

2. As long as you're under the rain cloud, yes it'll affect you when it touches you.

3. It has no effect in poisons EXCEPT maybe a poison that destroys tissue.

As for the effects of the jutsu, Raiyu specializes in Disaster Medicine (like relief operations, etc.) so my aim was to make a jutsu that will help with that, like wide-spread healing (Healing Rain) and pacification (Killing Rain). It can be used in many ways, both for battles or outside of it.

@Neko

Yes =O

This is like Terrain of Hell, except it's water and is full of lurve... not death and destruction.

[kajowwojak]

I've spoken my piece. Looks good to me now, good luck.

even though... you havent really done anything... because apparently you are even more awesome than you look...

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Keep up the good work!

[jameshawking]

I've got a problem with burns being considered a "light" wound.

Specifically, 2nd and 3rd degree burns, where either your skin is sending incredible amounts of pain, and can be potentially lethal, or where you literally have no skin left.

[DeepSix]

Not sure if he can have it at this point (Jounin) but the med jutsu list wasn't specific about the rank for "signature med jutsu".
Aye, was also pondering whether that signature jutsu could go as far as S or remain limited to A slots... Personally don't have an opinion either way, but i couldn't find the specifics anywhere else either... o.O

Now considering most med jutsu, be it healing or damaging is done usually at close range (arm's length in fact) the 100m diameter is quite a boost. Basically B and A (?) slots affecting a single person at a time with direct contact and concentration required vs S slot affecting an entire area of who knows how many individuals...

Though since the healing/damaging effect would affect everyone just the same and since no other jutsu can be used with this i guess that sort of balances out...

Just making sure but this can't be used indoors right? Also the water would need to touch tissue, and not simply touch clothes or whatever... right? Though unless waterproof those clothes would eventually allow the water to seep through, assuming prolonged enough exposure.

Oh and "Low Stamina, Low Chakra Pool" - these two wouldn't really work. That's because a shinobi draws his energy from within and transforms it into those. Lowering those pools would basically be similar to a temporary state of chakra & stamina absorption, screwing with the jutsu and actions a shinobi could take. So could those be changed with strength, endurance or some other different stats?

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

Deep, limiting strength would also "screw with the jutsu and actions a shinobi could take". Drop strength enough, they might not be able to wear their armor.

I'm pretty sure those stat drops were meant to screw with the jutsu/actions someone can do. There isn't much of a point to dropping stats temporarily otherwise.

[Kopravich]

This can be called tiered jutsu? If not, all ok then...

[DeepSix]

Of course it will screw with that. In the end each stat affects something after all. On the other hand i can't think of other stats aside from stamina and chakra that deal with the OOC number of jutsu and number/length of actions they can take. And since there we have a Chakra Absorption jutsu already, well this effect will basically mimic that for as long as target is in the Killing Rain and 3 posts afterward. It's one thing gaining a heal/debuff area of effect jutsu that basically uses inspiration from 2 other ones, and it's another thing basically combining 3 distinct jutsu effects in the same technique. That would sneakily make it tiered...

Kopra it's close but in my opinion not really going over the edge. Still consider the above as well...

[Hironidin]

What happens if the water becomes steam?

[Yuki Aisu]

>___>;; I see a major flaw in it's effectiveness.

Aaaaaaanyway.

The slot thingeh is of any rank, signature med-nin tech. ^^ So it can be S, SSSSSSS^25, or F rank.

[kyubichan]

>___>;; I see a major flaw in it's effectiveness.

Aaaaaaanyway.

The slot thingeh is of any rank, signature med-nin tech. ^^ So it can be S, SSSSSSS^25, or F rank.

I call F rank.

=D

Aaaaanyway-

@james

Edited to say "1st degree burns".

@Deep

Edited to say "must touch the tissue that needs to be healed" and "must come in skin contact to take effect". Now for future reference:

When I say skin contact, I mean also something akin to that. That means a "omg it didn't touch his skin, it touched his eyes! that's not skin" argument shouldn't work.

"Killing Rain" is for pacification/crowd control, so I picked those stats to lower. I'll let the target pick one of them to lower then, except if their stat is already below average, because then the jutsu would be fairly useless no?

How is this tiered? You choose one of two effects per use of the jutsu, all it does is Heal or "Kill", nothing else after that.

@Hironidin

Nothing happens if it becomes steam. If you're under the rain, you're going to get affected anyway. If you're not under the rain, then the water would have been isolated away from the rain cloud where the chakra flows and then it would be 'regular water'.

I'm trying to keep this as simple as possible~ x.x

[DeepSix]

How is this tiered? You choose one of two effects per use of the jutsu, all it does is Heal or "Kill", nothing else after that.
Aye, but the very fact you have effects to choose from can be considered tiered. Bloodlines for instance share a theme, but they don't necessarily share a single effect that gets better with stages. A bloodline can in fact have 4 different effects, so long as there's some sort of link between them. Hence why being able to choose between effects can in certain jutsu techs be considered tiered. Anyways i already said above that i personally don't believe this to be the case here...


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