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    Default [A-Rank Missing Nin] Kira

    Name: Kira (Formerly Liddell, Kane)

    Age: 22

    Gender: Male

    Height: 5'8

    Weight: 155 lbs

    Appearance: Kira is anything but nondescript-the man dresses to be remembered, and even his normal features are remarkable. His eyes are green, but nothing that looks even distinctly natural. They have been compared to emeralds, with lights shining through them before, and indeed, it's not an inaccurate example. Kira's eyes are accentuated by his thin, pale face, and his blue-black hair that extends halfway down his back.

    His outfit, however, is what most remember about the man. Kira wears clothing of a strange material, one that feels warm to the touch, and seems to pulse as if it were alive itself. The material has the same appearance as tendons, minus the skin-except it's in varying shades of black, purples, and dark greys.

    Kira's boots rise to his mid-thigh, and starting at the knee, include black blade-like protrusions that gracefully slide backwards on his outer thigh, three per leg. Underneath the boots, he wears black pants of an identical material. Over his hips are a pair of tassets of the same material, that extend downward to the uppermost backwards facing protrusion.

    Kira wears gloves very similar in appearance to his boots, with the same three backwards facing protrusions-his gloves, however, extend only to his elbows. His long sleeve, form-fitting shirt is of the same strange material, but has a red "Spade" design on the chest. (like the playing card) On the back of this shirt is a black hood of the same material.

    Level/Rank: A-Rank Missing Nin

    Village: Ex-Nagare

    Language: Nagarean (Fluent); Common (Accented); Rikuhuu (Accented); Sati (Accented)

    Main/Favored Weapon: Tamashi Keimusho - Soul Prison

    Side Arms:
    Five lbs of Broken Glass (Hidden inside compartments in his boots, gloves, etc.)

    Element: N/A

    Fighting Type: Ninjutsu; Genjutsu

    Physical Strengths:
    - Excellent Chakra Control
    - Great Agility
    - Great Reflexes
    - Great Chakra Capacity
    - Very Good Handseal Speed
    - Very Good Speed

    Physical Weaknesses:
    - Cannot use Elemental Chakra [Absolutely Horrible]
    - Horrible Strength
    - Horrible Endurance
    - Horrible Immune System (x2 Post Duration, Enhanced Symptoms)
    - Very Bad Close Range Combat Skill
    - Very Bad Stamina

    Mental Strengths:
    - Excellent Memory
    - Great Pain Tolerance
    - Very Good Reaction Time
    - Very Good Skill w/ Genjutsu
    - Can Read Lips (Good)

    Mental Weaknesses:
    - Insane (Horrible)
    - Disloyal to Everyone except Kalua (Horrible)
    - Horrible Teamwork
    - Sadistic (Very Bad)
    - Antisocial (Very Bad)
    - Easily Distracted (Bad)
    - Overly Playful (Bad)
    - Afraid of Thunder (Bad)

    Jutsu: 24/24 (22 Jounin, + 2 E-A Missing Nin)

    Basics
    Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill] - Ninjutsu
    Kinobori [Tree Climbing] - Ninjutsu
    Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] - Ninjutsu
    Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release] - Genjutsu


    E/D - 5
    Koe no Mozouhin [Voice Imitation] - Ninjutsu
    Utsusemi no Jutsu [Projection Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Dekisui O Wa-mu [Drowning in Worms] - Genjutsu ~Eye Contact~ OR ~Skin Contact~
    Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique] - Genjutsu ~Seeing Kira use Handseals~
    Pull - Genjutsu ~Kira Extends his Palm Towards the Victim~


    C - 6
    Shintenshin no Jutsu [Art of the Valentine] - Ninjutsu
    Futa Gansaku (Fake Cover) - Genjutsu ~Seeing Kira's Handseals~
    Itami Nai [No Pain] - Genjutsu ~Seeing Kira's Hands Hold the Rat Seal~
    Yami Shunshin no Jutsu [Darkness Body Flicker Technique] - Ninjutsu (Missing Nin Jutsu)
    Shitsuren no Jutsu [Broken Heart Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Spiritual Mimicry


    B - 7
    Sairuigasu [Tear Gas] - Ninjutsu
    Shinranshin no Jutsu [Mind Body Disturbance Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Itami [Pain] - Genjutsu ~Eye Contact~
    Gyakujou no Jutsu [Distraction Technique] - Ninjutsu (Missing Nin Jutsu)
    Senkaihari Zansatsu no Jutsu [Revolving Glass Massacre Technique] - Ninjutsu (Missing Nin Jutsu)
    Hiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu [Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Shindai Saibo [Sleeper Cell] - Fuuinjutsu


    A - 5
    Meisai Gakure no Jutsu [Hiding Camouflage Technique] - Ninjutsu
    Niseshi no Gijutsu [Art of Fake Death] - Genjutsu ~Cue In-Jutsu~
    Zenshintenshin [Complete Art of the Valentine] - Ninjutsu
    Bakuhatsu Shinzo [Exploding Heart] - Ninjutsu
    Seishin Buki [Spirit Weapons] - Ninjutsu
    Open Slot


    S - 1
    Tamashi Keimusho - Soul Prison - Legendary Item

    Background: Born Kane Liddell, this man's life has not been a pleasant one. He was born to a pair of adults with not dime to their names, and nothing to describe as adequate for raising a child. Kane was almost immediately abandoned, left under a tree for the elements or wildlife to finish off.

    Thankfully, or perhaps not, Kane was found not by a wolf, nor slain by a cold night, but instead discovered by a young child. The child brought Kane home, and Kane was living in an orphanage the very next day.

    It would be found several years later that something was...off about Kane. When the other children played, Kane sat alone by himself, mouthing words to a friend who wasn't there. Those in charge wrote it off as the eccentricities of a child-it wasn't thought of as strange until several year later, when Kane's behavior degraded. Kane consistently found himself in ill straights, sometimes lashing out violently for no reason, speaking to people who weren't there, referring to himself as the "Wee little man", and other things of a somewhat strange nature.

    He had just one friend in his days at the orphanage-a girl named Kalua, several years his junior. He and Kalua were inseparable from the day they met; she was three, he was fifteen. It bewildered everyone around them, but Kane had at least ended his habit of speaking to nonexistent entities, and began instead speaking to Kalua as if she were his own age. He would take Kalua out with him on his outings, where he began experimenting with a mysterious force-chakra.

    Unlike other ninja, Kane had always been unable to manipulate elemental chakra; there was no particular reason, he just couldn't do it. Even so, he trained and practiced his own brand of strange ninjutsu in the presence of Kalua, and when they were together, his skills seemed to flourish. With no formal training, Kane had managed to duplicate the ninja basics, and even the Genin basics, in the course of just one short year. He continued his training, and became abnormally powerful, given his lack of education.

    Upon his eighteenth birthday, Kane was told he had to leave-and had to leave Kalua behind. Kane finally snapped-he destroyed the orphanage, slaughtered the staff, murdered the inhabitants, erased all evidence of the orphanage having ever existed; save for Kalua. He left his old identity behind and took up the mantle of Kira, managing even to leave Kane Liddell in the ruins of the only home he had ever known.

    Now, four years later, the pair travel the world freely, doing as they please, never quite within the bounds of lawful society; but as far as Kira was concerned, that was just how he liked it.
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    Your horrible immune system weakness needs the usual notes.

    If you mastered kino/suimen, don't forget to add the notes so you don't need the handseals.

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    Eh? I thought mastery of those was a given at this level?

    And okie dokie, sir.

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    Realized I was missing Genjutsu cues. Added now.

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    umm if I remember correctly having an element is a must xD of course that you can still keep the elemental chakra weakness, but wanted to point that out (I read that in the RPC creation guide of Kyu)

    Also I'm not sure about your mental weaknesses, since you have all of the three most important and combat oriented strengths, but the weaknesses seem more like personality traits, could you please describe some of the effects of the mental weaknesses? that could help a lot :) [plus, if we use the so-hated numbers, weaknesses outweight strengths, but I'd still prefer if you describe some of the effects]

    Other than that it looks so awesome =D the appearance section is epicly good
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    An element is not required.
    「負ける事を慣れた」

    Spoiler!

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    I...would rather not get into it. Mostly because it messes with aesthetics.

    I removed one of the strengths instead. Is that acceptable?

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    Aesthetics are aesthetic so yeah it's ok ^^ plus the mental weaknesses combined can actually give him a big disadvantage when fighting with a team sooo yeah it looks better


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    Erm last time I checked.

    Handseals S/W is no longer acceptable.

    The Angel of Death has been abroad throughout the land, you may almost hear the beating of his wings.


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    I'm pretty sure that only applies to it being used as a weakness.

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    Your weaknesses outweigh your strengths by a fair bit (Basically you have an entire horrible weakness you don't need).

    You can add another great strength or just bump up some of those very goods if you want.

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    Even now.

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