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    Default [Konoki] Inozume, Minori [Genin]

    Name:
    Inozume, Minori

    Age:
    11

    Gender:
    Female

    Height:
    4'10

    Weight:
    90 lbs

    Appearance:
    Minori is a very bright, very cheerful little girl. Born and raised near the coast of the Country of Fire, her skin has a near constant tan to it that harshly contrasts her bright blue eyes. Her dark hair falls around her face in bouncy curls, and reaches to the small of her back.

    Minori ordinarily wears a white spaghetti strap shirt, with shorts of various bright colors-pink, yellow, lime green; it depends on the day, really. Finally, she wears short light brown boots. This is her summer/warm places outfit, at least. Her headband is attached to a turquoise cloth, and is worn around her neck.

    In colder climates, Minori wears the similar, but taller boots, with big poofy black pants tucked in to them. In these cases, she also ordinarily wears a long sleeved shirt, also white in color, and a giant coat, white, with various eye-offendingly bright shades of various colors. She has lots of them. Don't ask.

    At all times, however, she has 2 ninja leg pouch things, on either leg (obviously), and a white backpack.

    Level/Rank:
    Genin

    Village:
    Konoki

    Language:
    Konoi (Fluent); Common (Accented)

    Main/Favored Weapon:
    Omen

    Side Arms:
    25 Kunai : Left Leg Pouch
    15 Shuriken : Right Leg Pouch
    15 Explosive Tags : In Backpack
    2 Soldier Pills : In Backpack

    Element:
    Katon

    Fighting Type:
    Ninjutsu/Taijutsu

    Physical Strengths:
    - Very Good Agility
    - Good Chakra Control
    - Good Long Ranged Accuracy
    - Above Average Sense of Smell

    Physical Weaknesses:
    - Very Bad Strength
    - Bad Reflexes
    - Bad Endurance
    - Below Average Hearing

    Physical Trait:
    - Using chakra produces a warm, euphoric feeling for Minori. Use of more chakra at once heightens the potency of this feeling.

    Mental Strengths:
    - Very Good Intelligence
    - Very Good Memory
    - Good Teamwork Skill
    - Good Situational Awareness

    Mental Weaknesses:
    - Very Bad Pain Tolerance
    - Very Bad Genjutsu Skill (+2; +1 Kai Delay)
    - Bad Planning Skill
    - Bad Recklessness

    Jutsu:
    Basics-
    ~Bunshin no Jutsu~ ~Clone~
    ~Henge no Jutsu~ ~Transformation~
    ~Kawarimi no Jutsu~ ~Body Switch~


    E/D
    ~Hakken no Jutsu~ ~Detection~
    ~Kesu~ ~Extinguish~
    ~Katon: Osoi Hinawa~ ~Fire Release: Slow Fuse~


    C
    ~Katon: Boukaheki~ ~Fire Release: Fire Wall~
    ~Katon: Housenka no Jutsu~ ~Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower~
    ~Katon: Kainushi Sukoshi~ ~Fire Release: Little Animal Guardian~


    Background: Minori was born and raised on the shores of the Fire Country, trained from birth to be a diver. No. That wasn't the life for Minori-she loved the sun, and the warmth of the beach, not the cold depths of the ocean. After calmly (in tears) explaining to her parents that she would really rather not carry on the family business (she was eight, so it's not like she didn't have options), they agreed to have her combat abilities tested-she liked warmth and heat so much, she might make a good Katon ninja, or so they thought-turns out, they were right.

    Minori's type ended up being Katon, much to her delight-she could make her own warmth, whenever she wanted! What more could she ask for?! Well, a lot, it turns out. She ended up being ok with jutsu, but she never really excelled in anything. She was always a quick girl, but due to her size and shape, that wasn't impressive enough to make a major difference. Her time in TSU was short, and the girl did fairly well at most of her studies; as said earlier, she was never really amazing, but then again, she was never really trying to be.

    Her genjutsu classes all were failures, as were any kind of powerhouse trainings-speed and ninjutsu were where she shined.

    After assuming the rank of Genin, Minori mostly resumed her old life, with the odd mission or so. Just becoming a ninja was enough for her-of course, duty called, and she would answer when it did, but she never sought out major improvement. She lived with her parents and started doing old things she used to find as chores as hobbies instead-namely, diving.

    Minori's life changed, however, during one of her "for old time's sake" dives. She found a strange egg in one of the reefs, warm to the touch, and with what felt like a pulse-Minori made it her life's mission to see the egg hatch, and took it also as an opportunity to finally start bettering herself. And then; well, she hasn't thought that far ahead yet. She's 11. Give her a break, geez.
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    1. If each was 1 pound, that would be quite heavy. The average katana is only 3 lbs.

    2. Basically, yes, but not quite. It's not mentally impairing...I'd say it's closer to a massage or something.

    3. Situational Awareness is keeping track of your environments. Like walking into a room and taking note of the fact that three people in the corner won't stop staring at you, or paying particular attention to the footsteps behind you that have been at the same approximate distance for the past 2 miles.

    4. I believe exact post enhancers were removed in favor of a more free-form system.

    5. Stole it from Yuki. *shrug* I could list the myriad of things eggs can't do as weaknesses...I figured "it's an egg" was sufficient to demonstrate that pretty much anything requiring active thought isn't possible.

    Chicken eggs, yes, probably. This isn't exactly a normal egg though.

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    Right I just checked the katana I have here and yeah it's 3lbs on the dot. Alright then I can concede to that point.

    massage? As in where you rub ones shoulders? o-o;;

    Really? I see alot of profiles going by exact post numbers now... strange still if it's ruled out of that then so be it.

    yeah the egg is just fine I just found the "it's an Egg" weakness to be funny.

    Anyways I have no further crit on it If I could I'd stamp it lol
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    For genjutsu weaknesses, I quoted this from Raph recently. Unfortunately I no longer have the source;

    Below average: +1
    Bad: +2
    Very bad: +2, +1 Kai Delay
    Horrible: +2, +2 Kai delay
    Absolutely horrible: +3, +2 Kai Delay.

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    Grr. That should be included in the gen rules...*will fix*

    -Both profile and gen rules-

    @ the feeling thing -

    It's like a high, but not quite. It's a physical type thing, all over the body. Like standing in the sun on a good day-but stronger than that. As I said, not a mental thing...meh. Just a pleasant kind of feeling. It's hard to explain, I suppose.
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    It looks good to me now. the only thing is the history should include before AS and during AS times since it doesn't really look like its included. Add some more background?
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    Bah. She's meant to be somewhat boring...added a bit.

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    Good enough. I'd say its



    worthy lol.
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    Two hours early for a bump, but even so...bump.

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