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  1. 19-10-2010, 05:49 #1
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    Default [A-Level Ninja] None

    The Timid Swordsman
    The Faltering Mage
    The Unconfident Musician
    The Crying Guardian
    The Loney Striker

    [Name] None

    [Nickname] What are they, I wonder~

    Note: Obviously, he's got nicknames galore. Worrying about what's written here will get you nowhere, fast. Feel free to post a nickname that your RPC or another RPC has called None that you know of, if you want.

    [Age] 17

    [Gender] Male

    [Height] 180 cm / 5' 11"

    [Weight] 115 pounds/140 pounds [min-max ranges]

    [Appearance]

    None is tall. Quite a fair bit, in fact. However, he can be found in a perpetual slouch at times, dropping his height over 4 inches. Despite his height, he isn't very heavily built. Rather than broad shoulders and a heavy stature, None has a lanky feel to him, but not. He can usually be found wearing sneakers of some sort, and pants, jeans or otherwise. His clothes vary from far too large to too short. His neck is of average size, with fingers that are long and slender. His hands are soft and smooth, as if he hasn't trained or used weapons very often. He can sometimes be found wearing gloves. At other times, training weights will find their way onto his body. His face is framed by black hair, which sometimes seems to shift to a dark blue or even brown. His eyes are black, though even they can seem to look a different color. Glasses usually appear on the boy as well, goggles as well. All accessories are made of tough material, simply because he doesn't wish for them to break. Light skin completes the equation. Over the course of his time in Seichi, his appearance has not changed in the least. He has traces of acne and bags under his eyes. Sometimes, he has a bit of stubble.

    As for scars and other miscellaneous things such as that, that will remain a secret. None looks like a civilian most of the time, and pinning him to be 'strong' or a shinobi is quite hard to do, unless he's trying to show it. It's worth noting that his hands are usually colder than most people's hands, even rivalling some of the Hyoujun.

    [Personality]

    None's personality is chaotic. It is suspected there might be something wrong with him mentally, perhaps something having to do with social skill or logical reasoning. Despite his intelligence, it seems that sometimes the boy doesn't use it. His moods switch at random intervals. In fact, he's practically useless at times, or dangerously ruthless at others. Sometimes, you'll find him referring to himself as Yuki. Other times, he just doesn't know. For all we know, he could very well start breaking the fourth wall for this so called 'lulz'. Or metagame on himself.

    Such a wacked up person can sometimes show small glimmers of killing intent.

    In essence, attempting to classify his personality won't work.

    [Rank] None

    [Respective Level] Jounin/A-rank MN [Medical Specialist]

    [Village] ---

    [Languages] Common [no accent], Hyougaan [Unclear Accent], Sati [Unclear Accent], Earth Languages [Mixed Accent], [Empty]

    [Animal Speech Languages] Small Flying Animals ['Other' Birds and Flying Reptiles], [Empty], [Empty]

    See also: [Absolute Understanding] - [List]

    [Social Standing] Unknown

    [Element] --- [Raiton-Locked]

    [Fighting Type] None [Despite being a user of ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu, None is less than great with them]

    [Personality]

    [Strengths]


    -Unknown
    [Detriments]

    -Insecure
    -Compulsive. He might just get the urge to draw or sing in the middle of a speech about Socrates, for absolutely no reason.
    -Heart. It can shift from Ice to Metal to Flames.
    -Procrastination of a kind
    -Can't decide whether or not to be indecisive
    -Mentally Spontaneous. This can include a slight inability to take things seriously, at times. It can also just make the person flip around a fair bit.
    -Light stutter/jumbling of words. While he can be strong and straight-spoken, he can also be a mumbling introvert.
    -Irrational Fears of Random Things/Paranoia
    -King of Hearts
    -Joker of the Wrong Deck
    -Impulsive/Prideful
    -"Villain Cliche: Ridiculous Monolouge"


    [Main/Favored Weapon] None

    [Secondary Weapon] Anything

    [Weapons/Items]
    Spoiler!


    [Background]

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    I can feel it. I know. Somewhere inside me, I know.

    Don't we know each other?

    Alone. Always alone. I'd like to touch the sky someday.

    Born in the spring, the chaos of None was not a natural thing. Aging through his years day by day, the boy grew up moving here and there for a few years until he hit 3. Then, they settled down in an unclaimed strip of land somewhere in the world, before growing up. Well or worse, is a tale to be told by the person, not the creation. Soon enough, the boy found himself somehow within the world of Seichi. How he had made it here, he didn't know, but it wasn't what he was used to. What was he used to? Memories wouldn't return to him for some reason. It was so odd, so surreal.

    Without clear memories, only hazy outlines, the boy retained his personality, but not things about his old life. Now 15, he found he was able to use more than he would have thought, but still doesn't understand this concept. For all he believes, ninja aren't real. Oh, what a rude awakening he shall recieve. And he had recieved within a few days. Now on his new week, a job, a life, a new reality beckoned to him. Cast away the old life, forget it if you can't remember. Onto the new. The worst thing, is that odd connection. As if you know someone, but you've never met them before. What an odd child.

    Without a village or citizenship, what will become of this odd child now? He'd be captured and put into testing in a laboratory, of course. As for languages, how do you learn a language without anyone to teach you? Picking up words and sounds. Simplistically enough, the child attempted to grasp the language, and was oddly good at it, as if something was helping him. Wonderful, isn't it? Regardless, the hear and repeat method created a screwy set of accents within the boy. Oh, sadness. Three guesses where he learned his jutsu? The same. Guess how great he is at them? Somewhat. Basics aren't his forte, though knacks for certain jutsu are around.
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  2. 19-10-2010, 05:49 #2
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    [Jutsu]

    [Basics]
    Academy:
    Henge [E]
    Kawarimi [E]
    Bunshin [E]
    Genin:
    - [E/D] Nawanuke
    - [C] Kinobori [Full Mastery]
    - [C] Suimen [Full Mastery]
    - [C] Genjutsu Kai

    [Slots]
    [E/D Rank Slots]

    -Voice Manipulation [E]
    -Ikiminou Benkou[E]
    -Comfort Song [E]
    [Audible Thoughts] [D]
    [True Projection] [D]


    [C Rank Slots]
    -Musical Seals [D]
    -Projection Technique [D]
    [Double Voice] [D]
    [First Blood of the Witch [Magic]] [C]
    [Gender Swap]-[Bracelet of Oath] [C]
    [The Come Hither Look] [C]


    [B Rank Slots]
    [Mind Reading] [C]
    [Record of Time] [C]
    [Subtitles] [C]
    [Identity] [B]
    [Bubble of Sound] [B]
    [Science!] [B]
    -Hassei [B]


    [A Rank Slots]

    [S Rank Slots]

    [Bonus Slots]
    [18-05-12] [Master of Illusions] [A]


    [Medic Slots]
    [B Rank Slot] [Perfect Voice Manipulation] [C]
    [A Rank Slot] [Breathing] [C]
    [X Rank Slot] [Eyes of the Witch] [A]


    [Jutsu Levels]
    [E Ranks]
    -Voice Manipulation [E]
    -Ikimonou Benkou [E]
    -Comfort Song [E]


    [D Ranks]
    -Projection Technique [D]
    -Musical Seals [D]
    [Double Voice] [D]
    [True Projection] [D]
    [Audible Thoughts] [D]


    [C Ranks]

    [B Ranks]
    [Bubble of Sound] [B]
    -Hassei [B]


    [A Ranks]

    [S Ranks]
    -None


    Spoiler!


    Jounin >> 23 Jutsu: [5 E/D + 6 C + 7 B + 4 A + 1 S]
    +1 B, 1 A, 1 Spec. Tech


    Notes:
    -None gains no bonus MN jutsu slots
    -These notes will be removed as they become irrelevant.
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    Note: None suffers from some passive effects to his strengths and weaknesses due to his legendary pets and their strengths and weaknesses. These changes can be found here, in Kuro and Shippu's Genin profile.

    [Physical]

    [Strengths]


    -Excellent Stamina [read: Ki] - [This is None's prized attribute, his unwillingness to quit or stop going. Most of the time, this isn't even fully utilized]
    -Great Flexibility
    -Great Mobility
    -Above Average Mana Pool [the equivalent of Chakra Pool]
    -Chakra/Mana Control [Above Average]
    -Good Self-Balance/Control [He is aware of himself, and his reach, ect. Balance is slightly better, as is coordination with self, and the ability to do aerial tricks, ect]

    Resistance to Temperatures [+-10 degrees ]

    Excelling Leg Strength/Accuracy [This is enhanced by mobility. Kicking something with legs is accurate. More so than his arms.] [Great]
    Stupendous Grip Strength/Wrist Strength [After dealing with weapons and swords for so long, along with attempts at non-lethal throws and grabs, None's gotten rather good at this] [Very Good]
    Excellent Endurance

    -Fairly Good Hearing [And despite this, isn't vunerable to sonics. Probably because he's immune to himself. And by fairly good, I mean really awesome.] [Very Good]
    -Great Singing Voice
    -Impressive Aesthetic/Vocal Ability [Artistic, Lyrical, ect] [Great]
    -Impressive Skill with Intsruments/Voice/Music [Great]
    -Musically Attuned [Good]

    -Great Breathing
    -Appearance/Charm - [ie. Wild birds might not fear him as greatly, ect.] - [Due to None's shapeshifting, hiding, purposely not bothering with a good appearance, and all that jazz, his appearance is both non-static, and manipulateable. Usually for the better, positive direction, though looking foul is not outside his reach [as evidenced by the fact he looks foul every day]. His appearance, should he actually put real effort into it, is positively stunning, but seeing it is a different story. His Charm/Intimidation Factor is quite wonderous, really.　Looking inconspicious is also within his abilities.] [Great] How cute~

    -Fluid Handseals [To None, handseals hold no meaning. Therefore, the order of handseals does not make a difference to him, nor a perfect form, provided he uses two hands to form 'seals', however odd those seals may be. This is especially awesome when None's alternate handseal methods are taken into account] [Very Good]

    -Epic-Level Magical Resistance: The user has the choice to completely ignore and null any 'magic', be it illusion or physical. This is a None-only strength, due to it's nature. Permission required. ["That's impossible... his magical resistance..."] [Good] - [While it would be an excellent strength normally, as this only applies to None's techniques and other 'magic' specifically, this is more of a fake strength than anything.]

    Note: He becomes naturally better at sound based jutsu due to these skills. Enough so to balance out the fail he gains from sucking at jutsu of all kinds. It should also be noted that mana/magic and chakra/jutsu are most definitely not the same thing.
    [Detriments]

    -[Abs. Horrible] No Fighting Style - This equates to the same penalties as someone who was a nin/gen would recieve for taijutsu, or a tai/nin would get for genjutsu. The difference, it applies to all jutsu. He basically sucks at them. That said, he does have a 'fighting style', but it's very non-standard, as evidenced by the number of slotted fighting styles None uses.
    -[Abs. Horrible] No Element - None simply never 'naturally' had an element.
    -[Abs. Horrible] Can Not Learn Jutsu of Rank or Above - Because he just flat out sucks at jutsu [this applies to magic as well], he can not learn A or S-ranked jutsu like a regular jounin/A-rank MN. It should be noted he can learn Kuchiyose, but may not train pacts that are A-ranked or higher. Fighting styles, Fuuinjutsu, and Special Abilities are not affected
    -Absolutely Horrile Poison Resistance [x3 Post Duration, Instant and More Severe Effects]

    Weak Against Raiton [Very Bad] - [Electricity. He conducts it. It's as if it's attracted to him... does more damage, more obnoxious...]

    - Abs. Horrible Throwing Power [with arms]
    - Horrible Throwing Accuracy [With Arms] [None tends to just lob things at people instead, since at least that way it's easier to catch his fail throws]
    - Absolutely Horrible Upper Body Strength [The only reason it's not absolutely horrible is his tendancy to use handstands and flips, as well as giving kids piggy-back rides. This is in relation to his punches more than his weapon usage. Since he's fairly strong now, according to his rank, he's been paying less attention to this.]

    -Absolutely Horrible Handseal Speed [His complete inability to form the standard handseals quickly after the first one often leaves him slow when forced to use the standard handseal set] [Very Bad]

    -"I HATE JUTSU!" - [Global Jutsu take 5 times more chakra than normal, unless they are jutsu such as Chakra Transfer or it just wouldn't make sense [like jutsu that don't take chakra or Chakra Absorption]] [Absolutely Horrible]

    -"Ugh, Conformity" - [Global Jutsu take more handseals than normal, an amount that would be more appropriate for a jutsu two ranks above or 4 times as many, whichever happens to be shorter] [Very Bad]
    -"Dissociative Existence" - [Global Jutsu more concentration than normal [Rank+1] unless they would take no concentration or exist within the category of jutsu that is described in None's genjutsu strength (jutsu that deal with words/music/sound, basically)] [Very Bad]

    -Below Average eyesight - [None's eyesight is below 20-20, to the point that he sometimes wears glasses] [Below average]

    -Horribly Ticklish
    -Slight Sensitivity to Sunlight [going from dark to light rapidly, or looking at light bugs his eyes.]
    -[Bad] Appearance. He will sometimes look like he's glaring, or his eyes are really forceful, or he's a delinquient. On the same vein, he can very well look like a lost puppy. This is a small side effect to being a decent actor and somewhat neutralized by his 'charm', if he should actively pursue it.

    -Basics Fail, Part I [Kinobori can not be used on None's feet unless None is jumping from spot to spot. In other words, in order to use Kinobori, the user has to do things that require leaps with the feet/creativity, or use Kinobori with the hands, ect.] [Bad]
    -Basics Fail, Part II [Suimen can not be used to stand on water. The user must stay in motion. Furthermore, the cost of Suimen doubles.] [Very Bad]
    -Basics Fail, Part III [Can only create one clone with bunshin] [Bad]
    -Basics Fail, Part IV [Can only use Kawarimi once per thread instead of three times and the maximum rank of jutsu he can use them against drops to C-rank.] [Very Bad]
    -Basics Fail, Part V: [When using Henge, he must retain the humanoid shape.] [Bad]
    [Mental]

    [Strengths]


    -Strong Willpower [Great]
    -Surprising Reaction Time/Processing Power/Thin Slicing Power - [Synergy with the other stuff is what makes this really useful and worth something]
    -Well Rounded/Jack of All Trades [This infers that he is able to use a variety of weapons and items at a decent level. He can also perform other skills at a decent level. Inclusive of ability to use his own items well. He's actually surprisingly good with his sword and such.] [Great]
    -Excessive Logical Ability - [Big Synergy with Wit and Cunning] [Very Good]
    -Excessively Adaptable [This infers that he will be able to grasp an idea, concept, or usage of a item/weapon fairly quickly. In addition, he can adapt to a situation with ease as well] [Great]
    -Excellent Musical Recognition/Adaptation [Very Good] [Synergy with Excessively Adaptable, obviously]
    -Excels at Music Theory [Very Good] [Synergy with Experience and other musical abilities and logic and so on]

    -King of Games [You'd better believe it. This also happens to increase his concentration, but not in the way that it increase the number of techniques he can hold at once. A more general 'concentration'. Very Good]
    -Awesomesauce at Camping and Sports and Housework, Mark II [Very Good, also increases ability to concentrate, especially for long periods of time. Note, however, that this does not increase his ability to cast multiple jutsu at once.]

    -"I'll capture your heart~" - [Sound or Word based genjutsu and Genjutsu intended to emotionally influence the target last 1 posts longer against targets. This would include subtitles and comfort song and almost all of None's custom genjutsu. These genjutsu also tend to be more awesome in terms of other characteristics, like strength and variability] [Very Good]

    -Decent at medical stuffs [ Above Average ] - [combined with knowledge and intelligence and experience, None knows a fair bit more than the average joe [and unfortunately, medics] about injuries, healing, and so on]

    -My Very Own: Really good at custom jutsu/magic. He's so excessively good at these things he's created/manipulated that it's as if he has an affinity with them. This is further inclusive of his ability to use his custom abilities and items. [Excellent]
    -Perposterous Concentration [None's concentration is so good, it's listed three times in this strength section] [Excellent]

    -Anticipation Skill [Good] [None combines his logic, wit, creativity, and all that to come up with options for other people. This simply supplements that in that it gives him an element of experience and 'most probable path'.

    -Lockpicker [Good]
    -Great Actor [Not only is he good at faking, he's good at telling when people are faking and seeing right through them]

    -Powerful Wit/Cunning - [Big Synergy with Logical Ability] [Very Good]
    -Impressive Creativity [Very Good]
    -I'm a Housewife/Watch my Butler Skills: [Good at Cooking, Sewing, Homemaking skills, ect. Really good. Cleaning and so on is included.] [Great]
    -Notable Drawing Ability [Good]
    -Dormancy [Any ability or characteristic of any kind can be lowered to any amount or turned off, and returned to its original state at will. Do note that weaknesses must be made more detrimental, and lowered does not mean they become a lesser weakness, but a greater one, and thus, more detrimental] [Great]
    -Decent Pain Tolerance [Fits with willpower] [Very Good]

    Morals

    -Unrealistic Multi-Tasking Skill and Concentration [None can literally be thinking two things at the same time and having his different voices all be saying different things. While he can't cast very many more jutsu/magical techniques than another with really good concentration, things that would normally be impossible due to the brain's limits are more in reach. This 'concentration' does not affect the ability to cast multiple jutsu at once, but rather the ability to be completing multiple activities at once that would normally be incredibly hard.] [Excellent]

    Note: All these strengths tend to create synergies with each other. For example, being very witty would make his creativity much more accessible and thus boost it from what it would be if he wasn't witty, and so on and so forth.
    [Detriments]


    Basics Fail, Part VI: [Genjutsu Kai takes 3 times as much chakra when used on oneself.] [Abs. Hor]

    Genjutsu Defense [Genjutsu last a very long time,x3, by choice, excluding those that are affected by None's relevant strength, which only increase by one post] [Abs. Hor]
    Protective [If something is that important to him, it's not going to be lost]
    Stubborn [If there's something he really wants to do, he'll try to defend it or somehow get his way]
    Manipulative [If there's something he really wants [to do], he'll try to defend it or somehow get his way]
    "I don't want to!" - [Dislike of needles and being restrained until his personality simply snaps] [Very Bad]
    "Just watch me quit." - [Tends to push himself too hard or do unneccessary things] [Fake]

    Social Abnormality: [Is sometimes socially odd described as creepy/awkward or sometimes as funny instead]

    "The Shakes"/"Relationships" - [None's defintions are far different from the norm and is somewhat naive in terms of relationships and has too much experience in other ways. In addition, he has the tendancy to not open up very quickly if one were to try and pursue a relationship with him in the normal ways] [Bad]

    Poor Memory & Resultant Behavoir - [None's memory is excessive to the point that he will mix up names of people or take longer to recognize someone than the average person, his memory tends to be a jumble. This is really secondary to the fact that None has very jumbly memory pre-Seichi to the extent of being a source of light insecurity for him] [Very Bad]

    Loyalty - [He's not loyal to an organization or group, he's loyal to a person. And if it's not you... well, sucks. For that reason, None tends to get himself in binds at times or fumble on what to do] [Very Bad]

    Slight Insomniac/Odd Looks [Can cause him to be semi-irrational, and he will usually look... not attractive. Not disgusting or gross, but plain/unnattractive. Conflict with his ability to look good, which occurs less frequently but is of greater capability]

    "I can't tell you." - [Will bottle things up at times, causing him to become more stressed, irritable, ect. Over his time in Seichi and his life, this has gotten even worse.]
    "UNREALISTIC!" - [Will try to make things 'realistic'. Ie. A ghost will be a giant white teddy bear, he will ignore the fact it's flying. This is weaker than before after having spent quite so long in Seichi.] [Fake]
    Chilly

    Unrefined - [Although some may consider this a strength, None's lack of a formal fighting style and overabundance of stamina can be a problem for him. His attack style tends to shift unlike most fighters with his fighting prowess would, among other issues] [Below Average]

    Respect [He tries to be respectful when the situation calls for it, which may lead to awkwardness. At the same time, when he isn't respectful, it can be quite blunt or abrasive. Adds to slightly poor social skills or caring too much about other's opinions]

    Monolouging - [As a result of his high-speed thinking and personality, None has the tendancy to monolouge internally or externally at times] [Bad]
    Short and Sweet - [Because None knows he monolouges sometimes, he tends to stutter and ramble when speaking or try to be incredibly succinct. Finding a middle ground is hard, which tends to create a bit of a communication problem] [Bad]

    "Preeeeeetty~" - [Likes the rain and butterflies and pretty things. That might get a bit awkward, or he might walk into the rain, just to feel it soak around him]

    "Let's pretend!" - [May Act flamboyant to cover up his insecurity or really hidey to just disappear when there's a larger group or attention is on him.]

    "For all the wrong reasons." - [Irritatingly Selfless, when it doesn't matter. ie. Not a battle, but a conversation or a mission. Now, this even extends to missions in that he might focus too much on keeping other people out of harm's way and not worry enough about himself]

    Semi-Reckless/Temper/Critical [Can get to be reckless, or lash out at others if they're being stupid. He doesn't always sugarcoat, you know.] --

    "Who said I'm scared?" - [He can be irritatingly calm, when it isn't a good idea to do so. ie. Pitch black area, and he strolls about as if he'll survive, and things'll be fine]

    "Commitment Issues" - [None has issues committing to something] [Below Average]
    "Perpetual Exhaustion" - [When None is tired, he changes his fighting style and personality] [Below Average]

    Overestimation - [None tends to overestimate the strength of his enemies, causing him to act as a reactionary, go for attrition, or try to strike before he can get beaten into little crispy fritters. In simple terms, his overestimation of other's strength tends to mess with him until he can get an accurate reading. This is usually only a real problem for enemies of his rank. If he's not being targetted specifically, however, he has no problem smacking someone upside the head when they target a friend.] [Bad]
    Underestimation - [None underestimates his own physical abilities, causing him to not start off very strong [without gathering his wits or] until he pulls into his groove, [meaning that he must fight reactionary or take a moment to get himself ready mentally before he can attack] causing a slight delay if rushed into a battle or somesuch. He may react quickly, but his first instinct is not 'kill', it's more to the effect of 'defend'.] [Bad]

    Paranoid - [None is paranoid to the extent that he tends to keep his guard up and twitches at the sounds of the background, creating stress for him] [Below Average]

    "Psuedo-Insanity" - [Insanity. The umbrella term. He has it. As for its manifestations...] [Below Average]

    "Afraid of the stereotypical ninja" - [But since those don't exist on this forum, this never really comes into play.] [Fake]

    "Gender Identity Issues" - [To put it bluntly, None sucks at being a manly man. While he can attempt to be a manly man, doing it consistently is hard, and that causes... problems. For example, 'Ohohohohoho~' laughter in some cases.] [Bad]
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  4. 05-10-2011, 05:40 #4
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    It is finished~

    Moderators only for the S/Ws please. ^^

    Anything else is fair game~ Have at it. Remember to be polite though. >[

    Thanks in advance~
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  5. 14-10-2011, 16:44 #5
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    The link to WaterWings is broken in your weapons section, first post.

    You forgot the kitchen sink.

    Looked over everything up to S/W, will deal with that in a moment, after I get a pen and paper so I can balance this crap out.

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    Physical S/W section:
    Spoiler!


    Thus, the physical aspect comes out at around +55.

    The physical weaknesses, now.
    Spoiler!


    This brings the total to -57

    Physical S/W section is balanced, and a bit on the weak side. You may alter the list slightly in your favor if you like.

    Now onto mentals!

    Mental Strengths:

    Spoiler!


    With the above stated, for now this is +50.

    Mental Weaknesses:
    Spoiler!


    This brings the mental weakness total to -45. You need to add in another 5 levels of weaknesses, or remove/lessen some of the strengths.

    Bam. That's how it's done.

    So, the shortened, less detailed version of my conclusions:
    Your physical S/W section is overbalanced, and you can add another +2 to the overall strengths.

    Your mental S/W section is underbalanced, and you need another -5 to the overall weaknesses

    -Dormancy [Any ability or characteristic of any kind can be lowered to any amount or turned off, and returned to its original state at will. Do note that weaknesses must be made more detrimental, and lowered does not mean they become a lesser weakness, but a greater one, and thus, more detrimental] [Great]
    This needs to be clarified, and has been given a provisional value of +4 until it is.

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  7. 18-10-2011, 00:46 #7
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    First off, thank you for taking the time to critique this behemoth.

    The waterwings link is fixed and None now owns a kitchen sink.

    Physical S/Ws:

    I balanced downwards and counted all the 'fake strengths' as real ones, but kept the 'fake weaknesses' counted as fake. Should be balanced either way, but yes.

    Mental S/Ws:

    All instances of 'increases concentration' have been given a line that explains this does not affect None's ability to cast more jutsu at once [rather, it's concentration in a more general sense or the ability to keep concentrating for long periods of time, which TNF doesn't really take too much into accout]. If you wanted it to not affect concentration at all, I can remove the line entirely. I can't say I entirely agree with you on some of the strengths that are being counted as fake, but... yay, less balancing for me to do? I don't think I'd be able to balance it anyway.

    Dormancy basically does this. It lets None depower himself. It can give him the endurance of an academy student or the stamina of a genin. It basically 'seals away' his own power. This does not affect the senses in such a way that it would emulate something like Seal of Sensation and Perception and would instead only make things worse for none [making him even more vulnerable to bright lights, for example]. It basically lets the user make him or herself weaker than she actually is, in strengths and in jutsu [so a Housenka would appear to be a Housenka, but it'd do zilch in terms of damage or take obscene amounts of chakra for no reason]. Yuh?
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