[Genin] Kabashira Hanzo [Sato]

[Darth Righteous]

Name: Kabashira Hanzo

Other Names(s): Gohan

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Height: 5'7'' / 175cm

Weight: 55kg / 121lbs

Element: Mokuton [Wood Element]

Rank: Genin

Village: Sato

Language: Sati [Fluent], Common [Fluent] and Nagarian [Accented]

Fighting Type: Ninjutsu Specialist

Appearance:

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Facial Expressions

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Happy, Embarrassed, Sarcastic, Angry

Standing a few inches from 6 ft Hanzo’s dark green hair topples over his proudly worn village headband slightly. Beneath the headband his dark burgundy eyes stare into the soul of his opposition. His sideburns fall short of covering the full length of his ears even though the earlobes are average in length. Covered by the oversized zipper collar of his white garment his fairly small nose and mouth remain hidden to most.

Over his white garment is a dark grey waterproof coat which seems to be somehow connected to the garment. Beneath he wears a fish-net like singlet over his well defined but lean body. Below he wears a pair of length ninja three-quarter trousers that lead to a white cloth that rests above his ninja sandal boots. The white cloth is fastened to his boots via two rings placed at both sides of his feet. Hidden beneath this coat are his long legs which pack muscle enable high running speed in them.

The above is all that a common man would see just by looking at him in plain sight, but in truth there is a lot to him than meets the eye from the front view. For instance he has 3 holes in his body more than an average man just like the rest of his kinsmen, one at the base of his neck and one at each arm just before the wrists. These holes are the channel through which the several mosquitoes hiding in his body move in and out. Behind his collar at the centre is the symbol of his clan.


Main Weapon:

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Type: Culiseta Mosquito
Description: In appearance it appears like any other mosquito from the front view, but towards the rear it is seen that the wings separate backwards making a sort of ‘V’ shape while still being over the abdomen which in itself takes up the majority of the length. The mosquitoes are 1cm in length and have the capacity of sucking 0.2cl of blood each. They weigh 0.4 grams with proboscises of 0.5cm.
Natural Traits:
-Excellent trackers
-Stealthy
-Painful Aggressive Biters.
Abilities: They are fast fliers with quicker and more painful bites.
Quantity: 500

Side Arms:
Accessories
A pair of nekodes [Kept at right side undercoat]
12 Shuriken [Back Pouch]
16 Kunai [Back Pouch]
20 Explosive Tags [Right Pocket]
8 Sewing needles
4x 30feet of Wire [Left Pocket]
1 Metsubushi [Hot pepper seeds and Fine [powder]
1 Bottle of Ointment [Back Pouch]
2 Smoke bombs [Back pouch]
1 Light bomb [back pouch]
2 soldier pills
2 Fuma shuriken [Collapsed and hung behind waist]


Jutsu:

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[BASICS]
[E] Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
[E] Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
[E] Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
[E] Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill]
[C] Kinobori [Tree Climbing] [Untrained]
[C] Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] [Untrained]
[C] Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release] [Untrained]

[Specialist Jutsu]
[E/D/C]

[AS Jutsu]
[E/D] Mokuton: Foresuto Kaori [Wood Release: Forest Smell]
[E/D] Ikimono Benkou [Animal Speech] [Diptera]

[Genin Jutsu]
[E/D] [Free Slot]
[C] Mushi Katsu
[C] Zairyou Sousa no Jutsu [Material Manipulation Technique]
[B] Mushi Miyu no Jutsu [Bug Cocoon Technique]

Physical Strengths:
-Excellent Chakra Capacity
-Good Running Speed
-Excellent Stealth Skills
-Good Sense of Smell
-High Red Blood Cells Formation and Regeneration Rates. Normaly, the rate of RBC formation is 2 million per second, theirs is 3 million per second. RBC generation process normaly takes about a week, while in their bodies it occurs in five days, except that their red blood cells last 3 months rather than 4. [Genetic Clan Strength]


Physical Weaknesses:
-Sensitive Nose
-Horrible Poison Resistance [x2 Post Duration, Enhanced Symptoms]
-Absolutely Horrible Strength
-Very Bad Stamina
-Diagnosed with genetic chronic Hypertension. It shows upon reaching maturity as high normal hypertension. Gradually over the years it develops into Mild, Moderate, Severe, Very Severe then Chronic Hypertension

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Thus he is prone to the following:
-Shortened life expectancy.
-Headaches, fatigue, dizziness, disturbed heartbeats , blurred vision, facial flushing, transient insomnia.

[Genetic Clan Weakness]


Mental Strengths:
Observant
Very Good Mental reactions
Prime Tracking Skills
Focused


Mental Weaknesses:
Arrogant
Very Bad Genjutsu Defense [+2 posts, 1 Post Kai delay]
Ruthless
Temperament

Background:

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Born to an average Kabashira couple in the Culiseta division the infant found himself in the Wind Country in a small village known as Gohan. Why his parents picked this quite airy village for their short vacation would remain oblivious to him as he cried out to the world. In truth his parents had been travelling to the Safe Haven when his mother found herself unable to resist the child’s urge to view the world and at that moment Gohan was the closest place to them. His parents named him ‘Gohan’, the name of the village in the Wind Country because they felt the child had decided he wanted to be born there.

When a proper naming ceremony was held back in Sato the boy would be publicly known as ‘Hanzo’ to the world because his father had felt it was a more befitting name for the child had rebelled against Sato and had chosen to be born in the Wind. The name Hanzo would from then become his first name and ‘Gohan’ his middle name.

Growing in an assassin clan was more fun than it might seem to the outsiders. Yes their rules were strict, but once you made it a habit to follow their creed, everything was smooth sailing ‘officially’ as long as you never messed up. Learning to coordinate the several bugs in your vicinity was quite tasking, but the benefits were innumerable especially if you were scouting. And that being his best field Hanzo was almost always on assignments. While the higher ups went on outside missions and such he did small jobs within the clan compound. TSU was also a big part of his life, located in the Wind Country and not far from where he was born Hanzo started taking trips to school on his own at a relatively early age. This just made Nagare eventually like a second home to him because he often visited during his trips just to see what the ninja village was like. It wasn’t much of a shock to him or his parents when he started using words in Nagarian and eventually started speaking the language.

In The Shinobi University Hanzo found himself occupied in checking out the different insects that crept around the grassy field of the Wind Country. One way or the other he met another student, one much loose but still noble in himself; Katsuo. The two of them had some good times together, but with graduation they had to part ways to their respective villages. Though trips to Nagare and back would have still kept them close; the busy schedule of a Kabashira ninja didn’t leave too much time to do this occasionally. Now that he is Genin he has to focus on ranking up till he can represent his clan as a proper assassin.

[Oirarana]

Firstly, nice pic o.o

Secondly I think 'insect' is faaaaaaaaaar too broad for animal speech, for mosquitos 'Diptera' would work

I didn't really look at everything because RPCs aren't my strong suit

[Darth Righteous]

Thanks, and changed that.

[Decadence]

-Horrible Poison Resistance [x2 Post Duration]

Could you add to this: "enhanced symptoms"

Very Bad Genjutsu Defense [+3 posts]

and this should read: "(+2 Genjutsu Post Duration, +1 Post Kai Delay)

Polymath

Hmm, I just learned what a polymath is because of this, and I'm not sure I'm comfortable with an rpc that has a wide range of knowledge in unnamed subjects. Seeing as how the word can be defined in more than one way, though, could you give a little information about the strength on the profile? We may interpret the word differently.

[Darth Righteous]

I've made required edits. I will be interested in addressing further comments.

[Decadence]

Polymath: Has a wide range of knowledge

I'd prefer it if you chose a subject he was knowledgeable in. That strength is a bit too vague, and easily abusable; and there's nothing in his background that gives reason how or why a 15 year old would/could become such.

[Darth Righteous]

I'll see what more people think about this first if you don't mind. I find it highly limiting for me to put something as 'Knowledgeable in Architecture or Biology' considering it's to be a strength in the first place.

[Garzett]

Not limiting so much as fair. People who list knowledge traits need to be specific with what they know. You can't list "Knows everything intimately" - that's essentially what this strength means. You're going to have to add specifics on what you're knowledgeable in. Sorry, bud.

A polymath is commonly referred to as a renaissance man, and for good reason. They have a wide range a knowledge. Leonardo da Vinchi is a good example. He excelled in several areas of study with intimate knowledge in each. You know how a Jack of All Trades is "Master of None"? A polymath is the same thing... only they're "Master of All". Quite the difference.

I'm usually lax on mentals, but this is a bit different. If you want this polymath strength to stay, I'm quite adamant about it needing to be an excellent strength; being a literal polymath is essentially the highest scope of knowledge and ingenious you can hope to achieve in multiple areas of study. And yes, you'd still need to list what areas of knowledge you have such an intimate understanding of.

Do that, edit the background to explain how it fits, and it can stay... otherwise, I just recommend a normal knowledge trait. I am open to other suggestions you may have, though, to get this stamped.

[Darth Righteous]

That's the hammer on the head; I don't have an 'Excellent strength' slot. I'll just find something easier and cheaper. And then this being your own opinion, there are chances after I edit everything to suit another mod might still have problem with it and I'd have to edit again. Changed to 'Focused'.

[Garzett]

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[Garzett]

Reopened for updates/revisions.

[Garzett]

Status on this? Still updating? o.o

[Darth Righteous]

Yh, In a week + at max I should be at my peak activity, I'll touch it then if it's okay.

[ishi_kudo]

Status? o.o

*nudges Darth*

[ZacDesu]

As far as I can tell, there are no longer any Specialist jutsu that gives them additional jutsu. You may delete that if you want.

The new system for S/W is called 'Traits' and they have two more levels of strength: Specialty and Shortcoming. Basically, Specialty would be to Excellent Strength while Shortcomings is to Absolutely Horrible. You can have a single 'free' Specialty and two 'free' Strengths. After that, each additional Specialty/Strength has to be paired with an equal number of Shortcoming/Weaknesses. If you have any questions regarding that, please don't hesitate to ask.

[Darth Righteous]

Status? o.o

*nudges Darth*

-Is Nudged-

As far as I can tell, there are no longer any Specialist jutsu that gives them additional jutsu. You may delete that if you want.

The new system for S/W is called 'Traits' and they have two more levels of strength: Specialty and Shortcoming. Basically, Specialty would be to Excellent Strength while Shortcomings is to Absolutely Horrible. You can have a single 'free' Specialty and two 'free' Strengths. After that, each additional Specialty/Strength has to be paired with an equal number of Shortcoming/Weaknesses. If you have any questions regarding that, please don't hesitate to ask.

Havent edited it yet, but anyway the shinobi is retired now so...pls close this.

[Random]

Moved to WIP instead of closed. No point in closing it really.