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    potential spambot Academy student TigerJK's Avatar
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    Default [Hyouga] Xerxes, Leroy [AS]

    Name
    Xerxes, Leroy

    Age
    9

    Gender
    Male

    Height
    4ft 10in

    Weight
    60lb

    Appearance



    Leroy has long white/purple hair. He has red pupils and abnormally large eyes. Leroy is fairly tall for his age, and has a surprisingly toned body. He wears a necklace that was passed down from a distant relative as a parting gift for when he was accepted into the Academy. Leroy wears a tight black singlet with a black hoodie and bleached skinny jean-looking pants with a dragon tattoo on the right leg. He wears a standard belt which holds a pocket for all his sidearms. On his forearms, are standard metal arm guards which serves both as his weapon as well as his shield.

    Theme Song


    Level/Rank
    Academy Student

    Village
    Hyouga

    Clan/Org
    Dao Clan

    Language
    Hyougaan [Fluent]
    Common [Hyougaan Accent]

    Main/Favoured
    Metal Armguard [6in long, fits from knuckles downwards like fingerless gloves and armguard combined]

    Side Arms
    5x Kunai
    5x Shuriken
    10x Senbon Needles
    10x Explosive Tags
    1x Soldier Pills
    2x Smoke Bomb
    10m of Coiled Wire

    Element
    Hyouton [Ice]

    Physical Strengths
    Speed [Excellent]
    Stamina [Excellent]
    Agility [Great]
    Reflex [Good]
    Chakra Control [Good]

    Physical Weakness
    Ranged Accuracy [Absolutely Horrible]
    Chakra Pool [Absolutely Horrible]
    Immune System [Very Bad(+3 Poison Post Duration)]
    Strength [Bad]
    Endurance [Bad]
    Temperature Vulnerability [Below Averrage(Hot Weather causes Leroy to use more stamina than normal)]

    Mental Strengths
    Reaction [Excellence]
    Concentration [Excellence]
    Knowledgeable [Very Good(Battle Tactics, Poison, Technology)]
    Pain Tolerance [Above Average]

    Mental Weakness
    Genjutsu Vulnerability [Horrible(+2 Genjutsu Post Duration, +2 Post Kai Delay)]
    Phobia [Horrible(Spiders(Terribly afraid of them, Unable to face them at all))]
    Intimidation [Very Bad(Easily Intimidated)
    Refusal to Kill [Very Bad]

    Jutsu
    [Basic]
    Henge no Jutsu
    Bunshin no Jutsu
    Kawarimi no Jutsu

    [E/D Rank]
    Open
    Open

    Background
    ike most kids, Leroy grew up as an extraordinary child. He was a twin, a younger sister. Althought they were twins, the two had completely different personalities, in which he was outgoing, and she was shy and evasive.. His father, who was a scientist, designed and developed technology, and his mother was a chemist who's specialty was creating poison. Although unknown by Leroy and his twin sister, the two had been a shinobi before he was born. His mother was from the Dao Clan. After Leroy's mother had become pregnant with him, the two decided it was time to ditch the dangerous life as a shinobi and settle down with safe and proper jobs to support Leroy's growth in a safe environment.

    During his schooling, he was found to have an exceptionally bright mind. He excelled in chess and other tactical games requiring deep and logical thinking. Leroy also found another talent which he was surprisingly good. Running. Amongst his age, and even some of the teenagers and adults, he was capable of outrunning them and had the stamina to maintain the speed for great lengths of time.

    When Leroy was 5 years old, he was taught the ancient arts of Muay Thai, however lacked the physical strength to excel in. At the age of 6, he also took up Capoeira where he found potential in due to his quick movements required for the martial arts.

    Sample Post
    The creaking floorboards were muffled by the pitter patter noise of raindrops gently landing on the roof as Leroy squeaked across the living room. With great agility, Leroy swung himself around the sofa and landed with a cushioned thump. With a sigh of relief that his "modified" pair of shoes made of unused clothes were stealth-like, Leroy continued to slither up the stairs. Slowly but surely, he climbed while holding his breathe as though a mist of poisonous cloud hung around. Silently... Carefully... One step after the other.
    A horrifying screech that was too horrendous to be humane pierced through the space as Leroy jumped out of his skin.

    "LEROY XERXES! WHAT THE HEEEEEEELL ARE YOU DOING UP IN THE MIDDLE OF glTHE NIGHT!"


    Stuttering like a fool, Leroy stood up straight and looked down on his father's foot.

    "Er.. Umm,,, I.. I.. I waz... Ju,,ust.. Getting a glass of water?"

    Last edited by TigerJK; 08-02-2012 at 21:02.

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    Oh my, such an almost flawless profile from a first timer as his first post o.o

    You need to have at least two paragraphs in your background and you can pick two extra E/D rank jutsu from the jutsu list. Welcome to TNF ^^
    Spoiler!

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    potential spambot Academy student TigerJK's Avatar
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    Hahah thanks :3. The guides and comments from other approved apps helped a lot... I think?

    I increased the length of the background, and... am planning to make it a little bit longer~... If I can think of anything else to add :/

    Oh yeah, I know about the extra jutsu slots... but dunno what to put as of yet

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    15x Explosive Tags
    10x's is the max for students.

    30m of Coiled Wire
    10m, please. 30m is 100 feet of wire, which is far too much for a student.

    Jutsu
    [Basic]
    Henge no Jutsu
    Bunshin no Jutsu
    Kawarimi no Jutsu

    E/D-Ranked Jutsu
    - Open
    - Open
    I would also recommend the section was at least made with your jutsu slots included, like so. Makes things easier. *Nods.* Overall, a well done profile.

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    potential spambot Academy student TigerJK's Avatar
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    Fixed everything~ And also inputted your recommendation :D.

    Edit: Added Dao Clan into the app, and stated which side of the family was from it. Changed the background a lil as well~
    Last edited by TigerJK; 08-02-2012 at 20:39.

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    Android Fluffums Global Moderator Garzett's Avatar
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    Ah, was going to stamp, but I need verification from the Dao that you have permission to join. Waiting on consent.

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    Permission approved.

    Have fun dear :p

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    potential spambot Academy student TigerJK's Avatar
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    Thanks Verdandi ^^. Oh, not sure if I'm allowed :/ but added a theme song video thingy :B

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    Bam. Good to go.



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