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    Default (Albino Burmese Python) Viktor (AS)

    Name: Viktor

    Species: Albino Burmese Python

    Gender: Male

    Respective Human Age: 2 months

    Length/Height: 4 and a half inches

    Weight: 2 lbs

    Appearance: Viktor has a beautifully labyrinth patterned scales but he is an albino making his colors white with patterns in butterscotch yellow and burnt orange. Having the common python head, his tounge is blue unlike any other snake and has a V on his head and is how he got his name. His eyes are red like most albino animals. The body is slim, but easly shows muscles through it. The mouth has tiny super sharp teeth.

    In the wild, a normal burmese pythons grow to 12 ft on average, while 13 ft isn't uncommon, though individuals over 5 metres are rare, the longest being 18 ft 10 in. Being at a young age, Viktor is at home on the ground and in trees or hanging out on L, but L knows that as he grows bigger, he will tend to restrict most of his movements to the ground. Being the type of snake he is, he is also an excellent swimmer, being able to stay submerged for a long time. As he gets older he can stay submerged up to half an hour or more. Viktor, much like all Burmese Pythons, spend the majority of his time hidden in the underbrush or water to attack without notice. Viktor is still a good climber, as he has a prehensile tails.

    Like all snakes, Viktor is a carnivorous with a diet that consists primarily of appropriately-sized animals he can eat. Viktor's hunting style uses his sense of smell, with the aid of the Jacobson's organ in the roof of the mouth, to find small particles of whatever prey they are hunting, letting him and others able to catch their prey in light or dark conditions. Viktor, like most pythons, do not have to eat very often, usually only needed to eat about once a week. Once caught, he bites into an animal with his back-curving teeth, so when the target tries to pull away, the teeth sink further into the target. Next, Viktor coils around the animal to squeeze the breath out or, in some cases, to constrict its muscles and cause the main blood vessels to explode. Then he would swallow the prey whole with the aid of his hinged jaws.

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    Personality: Very calm nature and very slow, Viktor never seems like the one to hurt something. Don't trust the snake, he only likes one person.

    Rank: AS

    Fighting Type: Taijutsu

    Element: Water

    Jutsus: N/A

    Handseals: N/A

    Natural Traits: Great Swimmer, Able to hold his breathe for a long time, Strong, Able to track through the air with his tounge, can sense heat, lightning fast strikes, flexible

    Strengths:
    -Excellent Strength
    -Excellent Speed

    -[Good] Pain Tolerance

    Weaknesses:
    -Horrible Charka Pool
    -Horrible Charka Control
    -Ab. Horrble Agility
    -Ab. Horrible Endurnce

    -[Bad] Short-Tempered (Calm natured normally, but a slight jump at him or tap or anything makes him ready to attack even if its not the right target. Carroll, his owner, has been bitten a few times.)

    History:
    Carroll, "L", is from Sato and normally just found his way around the area where humans weren't at. Staying by the water alot, he would just sit back and enjoy living. One day, he yawned and as he held out his hand, an egg landed in it. A bird was flying down and trying to attack him for the egg. L didn't know how to handle it, thinking it was the birds, he was trying to figure out how to give it back when it cracked and a hiss came from it. A small baby python came out and looked at L. Being the first thing he saw, L was now the new father/mother thing to the snake, though they normally are solo animals. L got him out of there and held him close to keep him warm. As the time went on, the little grew fast and L now had a new pet in Viktor, his albino baby.
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    1. AS don't get fighting types.

    2. I'm pretty sure pets don't reap all the same rewards as regular RPCs in terms of specialist bonuses. Otherwise, they'd get 3 free slots [see: nin-specs] that would otherwise have to be paid for. That's pretty ridiculous.

    3. AS should be a baby. I don't care if pythons are that big at one year old, that's not 'relatively baby level'. It needs to be smaller.

    Assuming, of course, we even allow something that is one of the six biggest snakes in the world. That might have to be changed.
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    Pets do not gain bonuses, this is true.
    The fighting type is there to state what type of jutsu they may learn and what there best at. Nothing more.

    I am popping in however because I must ask you a question. We do have a size limit here, which is why most pets that are bigger then a lion or say a small bear are denied. Since this snake is 5 feet right now as a baby, can you tell me what the maximum size for this snake will be? If its too big, I would recommend making this a summon instead. o-o

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    OMG ITS ENKOU (HUGS)

    Yuki
    1- I'll edit that for now
    2- Also edit that out
    3- He is a year old ^^ Thats baby. I can go younger like 6 months or so if thats better


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    I believe they can get to 12 to 16 feet if I'm right... yep 12-16 feet

    ALSO I did something wrong. He would be about 3 feet as a one year old. They do grow up in only 4 years to full length.
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    They do grow up in only 4 years to full length.
    Even if this is true, TNF is really weird in that it expects you to adjust so that even if it would naturally be xyz length at a 'baby age', it will need to be younger and smaller until it's at an acceptable point for an AS. Your pet should be able to be smacked away and be nothing more than the slightest nuisance.

    A 3-4 foot python is not that. My research tells me that these things grow to be full maturity in 4 years [and live to be 20-30]. Considering it takes a human 18 [and they live to ~75] and we want a 'baby', it would be more accurate to have this be 2 months old instead, just by approximate guesstimation. The length should also reflect that.
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    K, he is 2 months old - 4 1/2 inches - 2 lbs
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    More on the appearance and please remove the absolutes like 'he gets to decide when you break free of his grasp'. It's an AS. A dinky little thing. o.o;
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    Quote Originally Posted by Yuki Aisu View Post
    More on the appearance and please remove the absolutes like 'he gets to decide when you break free of his grasp'. It's an AS. A dinky little thing. o.o;
    haha forgot about that part. I took it out and as for his looks, I put what his eye colors were and put a picture up. Ehh I am not sure what else to say about a snake ^^*
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    Spoiler the image please.

    Talk about his growth and development, for example, the size of his fangs, ect. ect. Pattern of his scales, fang size, ect. ect.

    Right now, it's 2 lines. Considering you have a jounin-level RPC, I kinda figure you can do better. =/
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    Quote Originally Posted by Yuki Aisu View Post
    Spoiler the image please.

    Talk about his growth and development, for example, the size of his fangs, ect. ect. Pattern of his scales, fang size, ect. ect.

    Right now, it's 2 lines. Considering you have a jounin-level RPC, I kinda figure you can do better. =/
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    I knew you could do it. ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Orion View Post
    Weaknesses:
    -Ab. Horrible Charka Pool
    -Ab. Horrible Charka Control
    -Horrble Agility
    AS pets don't get full credit for chakra weaknesses. He dosen't know any jutsu yet, so he's technically unable to manipulate chakra at this point, regardless of S/Ws.

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    Totally forgot about that.

    Mishio's right.

    It'd be like listing "can't use jutsu" on an AS pet. or "Can't fly" on a pig. They can't do that anyway.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mishio View Post
    AS pets don't get full credit for chakra weaknesses. He dosen't know any jutsu yet, so he's technically unable to manipulate chakra at this point, regardless of S/Ws.

    *noms mushy anvil*
    Nor would he at excellent anything be strong enough to kill anything other than a bug, a random bug that doesn't belong to an rpc or npc.

    But if it's a rule sure. Can you link me it? I checked the pet creation rules and couldn't find it.

    Ehh ok yuki. Shoot I don't know how to work this or something. K one second

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mishio View Post
    In that case, why are you bothering to give him Excellent strength? >_>

    It's the "No fake weaknesses" rule, or at least one interpretation of it. It's fine for human academy students, because they start with the basics, but pets don't get jutsu period until later, and chakra weaknesses are entirely fake until then.

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    I edited ok good look. Also he is going o be tai spec later on so chakra weakness was what I went with. I take it at genin level they still have the half chakra weakness rule since they don't have jutsus yet
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    It's not half. It doesn't count, period.

    Again, it's like saying your bird can't breathe underwater, your wolf can't fly, or your turtle can't launch laser beams out of its eyes. These are all things they can't do anyway, so listing them as weaknesses doesn't count at all.
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    So I can't even use chakra as a weakness? In anyway shape or form?
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    Not until you can use chakra.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Yuki Aisu View Post
    Not until you can use chakra.
    Strengths:
    -Excellent Strength
    -Excellent Speed

    Weaknesses:
    -Horrible Charka Pool
    -Horrible Charka Control
    -Ab. Horrble Agility
    -Ab. Horrible Endurnce

    If I remember right "fake" weaknesses can still be use. I'll just leave them in there and now I have edited it so it should equal now.
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    Yeap.

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