I'm absolutely horrified that this needs to be clarified, but apparently it does. If someone is asking for clarification on a crit in their app, they are not trying to argue. They are trying to get clarification for it, because the crit wasn't sufficiently clear, as clarity is need to argue it, or fix the app.
Doesn't a Kage get a free open slot like everyone else gets one for their special rank?
Even without that slot since I don't know much about Kage extras you should have a certain amount though on the right hand you've got slightly less and if you're leaving those open you should have that typed in there as to avoid confusions:
4 S - 2
7 A - 9
7 B - 6
6 C - 11
6 E/D - 1
So yeah I'm not sure how to get this turned around, unless you have some weaker techniques listed in higher ranked slots in which case you should separate them into categories using the slots you should have and list them where you want them
The first thing you need to do is put a note next to each technique that you gained through EJ learning so we know which ones are free, after that we can look at your slots again and figure out how many are free and tell you so you can then fill them and get back to training.
ugh...this is proving difficult. honestly i couldn't even tell you which ones would count towards EJ learning besides Bleeding Edge which was marked. I guess Containment and Drunken Forest Style would be too, but that's a guess.
They need to be marked somehow otherwise it reads with a bunch of C ranks in E/D rank slots. Try PMing Yuki to ask him how many you've done cos when I looked all I saw was a bunch of training and none of them were specified as EJ learning.
Jutsu training gives me the following made by you, Afro, and also for Zack. [In order from oldest to newest]
[Jutsu Learning] Woogie Beam Ray Cannon (Sato, Zack)
[Jutsu Training] Iron Forest Drunken Beast Style [Sato, Zack]
[Jutsu Learning] Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tribe of the Amazonians (Sato, Zack)
[Jutsu Learning] Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Queen of the Amazons (Zack Sato)
[Item acquisition] Armor of Ra (Sato, Zack)
[Jutsu Training] Bleeding Edge (Sato, Zack)
[Jutsu Training] Containment - Seal of Sensation and Perception [Zack]
[Summon Training] Shaman of the Amazons (Zack)
So those are all the things you have ever trained for Zack.
Edit history declares the following
In December, Katon: Yougan Fi-rudo no Sousaku [Fire Release: Lava Field Creation] was added to Zack's list, putting him at 28/27. I assume this is due to the X-mas freebie event we had. So that's one in your favor.
The edit before that is Tensei fixing all the broken links in your profile from the change-over.
So Edit History that I can see declares that you have one freebie.
Elite Jounin >> 30 Jutsu: [6 E/D + 6 C + 7 B + 7 A + 4 S]
It follows that before, there were 2 E/D ranks assigned, which we fixed, so you would have 26, maximum. I do believe we also added a C-rank, so 25.
It therefore then follows that there must be 2 more jutsu that were EJ learnings. I noted specifically that Bleeding Edge was an EJ training, and I believe that was the first of your free trainings. Since we added the C-rank, it therefore follows that Containment was probably what you used to fill that new 'open' slot. Therefore, it is likely that Shaman of the Amazon is your 3rd and final EJ learning.
In conclusion, your freebies are:
Shaman of the Amazons
Katon: Yougan Fi-rudo no Sousaku [Fire Release: Lava Field Creation]
Not sure exactly what up with your D-ranks, since you seem to only have one, but those are what I think your three are. My method of coming to this conclusion is noted above so that if I screwed up somewhere, you can see where and get any extras you should have. ^^;
Based on what has been said, Bleeding Edge, Shaman Summon and Lava Field have been designated for the EJ slots.
From there I filled the E/D slots with the following:
Chou [Butterfly] [D]
Katon: Kemuri Shiryoku no Jutsu [Fire Release: Smoke Sight Technique] [D]
Mokuton: Ki no Mikata [Wood Release: Tree Ally] [D]
Sennen Goroshi [One Thousand Years of Pain] [E]
Dainamikku-Entori [Dynamic Entry] [D]
Ok so this is the number of slots you have total
6 E/D, 7C, 7B, 9A, 4S
This is what you have on your list
6 E/D, 11C, 6B, 9 A, 2S
It comes down to this: At the moment you have 1 C rank in a B rank slot and 2 C ranks in S rank slots as well as 1 extra C rank jutsu over the total number you should have. You'll need to remove one C rank jutsu from your list though I recommend asking a mod if you can revamp your list a little because I don't believe you ended up using the free total revamp thing a while back. If you can get permission you'd then be able to get something better than a C rank tech in those S rank slots *nodnods*
Zack is a young man at the age of twenty-four. His youthfulness is apparent in his body, which is perfected by constant training and working out sessions. Zack is rather muscular, yet not to the point where his muscles are always bulging as he still retains a lean physique. This is partially due to his height. One noticeable thing about Zack is that he has rather long legs and arms.
Physically one of the most unique features of Zack is his hair. Zack has a dark brown, almost black, flowing yet messy afro. Ridings down the sides of his face are thick curly sideburns.
Zack’s skin is a light brown in color. His skin is rather smooth and he meticulously takes care of it. He does however have some minor scars along his body and a few barely visible ones on his face. Located above his right wrist is a chakra sensitive tattoo. When a small amount of chakra is placed into it, the tattoo glows red and shows the “Illuminati” symbol. Finally, Zack’s eyes are a rather common dark brown shade.
Zack has three separate outfits that he chooses from.
This is Zack’s standard outfit. This outfit consists of a standard issue Konokian jounin flak jacket in black. Underneath the flak jacket Zack usually wears a black long sleeve t-shirt. He wears standard issue black fingerless plated gloves. For pants Zack wears black BDU’s tapered to a slim-straight fit. He usually ties the pants a few inches above his ankles. His ankles are taped and over them are worn standard black ninja sandals. On the back of the flak jacket is a medium sized patch of the BDI logo.
Zack’s casual outfit consists of various clothing. Firstly he wears a slim white oxford. Typically he wears the top two buttons open to show a little chest. Over this he wears a custom military jacket. The jacket is navy blue in color with golden yellow trimming on such locations as the collar, sleeves and buttons. The shoulders of this jacket are adorned with the same color yellow shoulder tassels. For pants Zack wears navy blue chinos. These pants are cuffed at the bottom. For shoes he wears dark brown combat boots.
The Hokage outfit is the simplest yet the most fancy of Zack’s outfits. This attire consists of a long robe/jacket. The jacket is navy blue in color with red trim on the sleeves, a red collar, white trim on the collar and small-embroidered gold patterns around the buttons on the sleeves. The collar on this jacket is quite large. Zack goes shirtless underneath this jacket but he does taped from his waist to just under his belly button. Wrapped around his left arm is his red Konoki headband. For pants Zack wears navy tapered BDU’s and navy ninja sandals. His ankles to his feet, right before his toes, are taped up.
Konoi (fluent), Sati (slightly accented), Rikuhuu (accented), Nagarian (accented), Common (fluent)
Zack is a strict disciple of the hybrid martial arts system, Jeet Kune Do. He keeps a balance between using ninjutsu and taijutsu, often weaving them together to create the best combinations available.
*These weapons are sealed via the Bleeding Edge seal. All primary and secondary weapons are carried at all times. Primary weapons carried on beltloop, secondary carried in various pockets.
Zack carries around quite a few things that are all held on his personel. First he carries a Konokian Bingo Book. He also has a matte black zippo lighter. Usually he has a flask of some alcoholic beverage (preferably vodka). Using the Bleeding Edge seal, Zack also carries other accessories. These include the Blizzard Mask V.2, one 1/2 liter tube of Liquid Bandage, three Clot Pills, three Cats Eye, and the Legendary Armor of Ra.
Excellent Chakra Pool
Excellent Close Ranged Combat Skills
Great Chakra Control
Excellent Leadership Abilities
Great Pain Tolerance
Knowledgeable in ninjutsu and taijutsu combat
Absolutely Horrible Speed
Absolutely Horrible Agility
Very Bad Ranged Accuracy
Below Average Flexibility
Absolutely Horrible Genjutsu Vulnerability (+3 Genjutsu Post Duration, +2 Post Kai Delay)
Very Bad Temper
Extremely cocky at times
Overly Flirtatious (hinders his ability to fight women)
Afraid of any and all types of medical needles
Art of Water Walking [Suimen Hokou no Gyou]
Rope Untying Skill [Nawanuke no Jutsu]
Tree Climbing [Kinobori]
Wall Climbing Skill [Kabenobori no Jutsu]
Clone Skill [Bunshin no Jutsu]
Body Switch Skill [Kawarimi no Jutsu]
Transformation Skill [Henge no Jutsu]
Ninjutsu: [S]Woogie Beam Ray Cannon
[S]Shichuro no Jutsu [Four Pillars Prison Technique] [A]Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Queen of the Amazons [A]Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shaman of the Amazons(Free EJ) [A]Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tribe of the Amazons
[A]Hateshiganairyuu [Eternal Dragon]
[A]Katon: Enen no Sonata [Fire Release: Blazing Sonata]
[A]Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique]
[A]Katon: Yougan Fi-rudo no Sousaku [Fire Release: Lava Field Creation] (Free EJ/X-mas)
[B]Mokuton: Shichuka no Jutsu [Wood Release: Four Pillars House Technique]
[B]Katon: Kasai Tacchi [Fire Release: Fire Touch Technique] [B]Katon: Tama Dangan no Jutsu [Fire Soul Shell Shot Technique]
[B]Mokuton: Budouengakure no Jutsu [Wood Release: Hidden Vineyard Technique] [C]Containment [C]Human Radio
[C]Katon: Housenka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique]
[C]Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu [Fire Release: Powerful Fireball Technique]
[C]Mokuton: Moku Joheki [Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall]
[C]Mokuton: Toba no Fuku [Wood Release: Thorn Whip]
[C]Mokuton: Yari Sousaku no Jutsu [Wood Release: Spear Form Technique] [C]Bleeding Edge(Free EJ)
[D]Katon: Kemuri Shiryoku no Jutsu [Fire Release: Smoke Sight Technique]
[D]Mokuton: Ki no Mikata [Wood Release: Tree Ally]
[E]Katon: Hi Sunappu no Jutsu [Fire Release: Fire Snap]
Zack Sato's story started twenty-four years ago on the outskirt woods of Konoki. A young and pregnant Konoki medical ninja named Kasumi Sato was traveling alone to a nearby Fire County Village. During this trip she started to contract and would eventually go into labor. Stranded by herself she would deliver this child, naming him Zack. Kasumi would raise Zack as a single parent, eventually enrolling him onto the path of the ninja like others of the Sato family.
At the age of eight, Zack would enter the academy. After a short time there he would eventually become known as a class clown. He did not try hard at all, goofed off all the time and flirted with the girls there. He just wanted to be popular. Because of this Zack would spend roughly four years at the academy, eventually graduating at the age of twelve. It was at the academy though where he would meet Ikemoto Chase, his best friend and at one time partner in crime.
Zack would move onto the rank of genin, where he would gather much experience. At first he was assigned to a multination team under the leadership of a female sensei, Gin-Ryu along with teammates Alana and Hakkei. Zack didn't particularly enjoy this team as he was constantly butting heads with Hakkei. Fortunately though this team would be broken up and Zack would go under the guidance of a Konoki Elite Jounin named Doburoku Sakaki. Doburoku-sensei was a top of the line teacher. He would teach Zack the Jeet Kune Do style of martial arts among other things. Despite Doburoku feeling that Zack was not ready, he would find himself enrolled in the chuunin exams. On his first attempt Zack would pass, being on of the most promising students shinobi there that year.
At the age of 16, Zack gained the rank of chuunin. He would continue his studies including perfecting his Jeet Kune Do technique. During this time Zack was given the opportunity to leave Konoki and travel the world with Doburoku. They went to many exotic places and were exposed to a wide variety of things. These travels gave Zack a lust for power after seeing some of the most powerful shinobi techniques known to man. After a few months of traveling Doburoku would retire his shinobi life and travels after receiving the title of Sage. Despite his retirement the old teacher would promise Zack that he would keep training him. Doburoku traveled to Hyouga with Zack accompanying him. Doburoku decided to be a hermit living alone at the top of unsettled Shikyo Yama (Death Mountain). The journey up the mountain was both hard and dangerous, taking the pair three days to complete. To make things even harder Doburoku would force Zack to make the journey with weighted clothing. While this method was rather intense it would help Zack toughen up.
Doburoku and Zack ran the mountain, reaching up around two-thirds up on the third day. At this point Zack had passed out from exhaustion. They took a break for one day, although Zack was still tired he kept going, finally reaching the peak 4 days after they had started. Up at the peak it was extremely cold and the oxygen was thin. Doburoku made Zack built him a cabin, he claimed it would also help with strength and stamina training. After four days of building, the two had finally finished. Zack was suffering from exhaustion, and rested in Doburoku’s cabin. Doburoku gathered the necessary supplies from a small Hyouga village, which was near the mountain. After a week of rest Zack and Doburoku trained intensely for one month. Zack then decided it was time to go. He told his sensei that he would visit him from time to time, of course Doburoku told Zack was welcomed anytime he wanted.
Returning back to Konoki, Zack would start to work his ass off. He would find himself constantly in missions which seemed to get more and more difficult as time went on. Finally Zack was assigned to his first S-rank mission, which was pretty unusual for a chuunin. The mission consisted of a high-ranked assassination of a high ranking criminal leader. Single-handedly he did the job and not only took out the leader but also many of his associates. Once the news had got to Konoki he was given a promotion to the rank of jounin. This was a big achievement for Zack, raising his confidence level to new heights.
One of Zack's first tasks as jounin was to lead a genin team. His first genin team was an experience. While the group didn't last long he made a lifelong friend in one of his students, Kouji Ishida. Kouji would eventually become Zack's protege and "little brother." During his brief stint as jounin, Zack studied, taught and trained hardcore. Due to his rank he was allowed an audience with the Hokage who he would become close friends with. Eventually at the age of nineteen he would once rise in rank, this time to Elite Jounin.
Now at the rank of Elite Jounin, Zack would have gained a lot of fame around Seichi. He would make numerous new acquaintances and friendships with shinobi of various nations and ranks. He would become known as a fearsome fighter, great business man and to some a scumbag playboy. One of these friends included Rupert Griffin whom he would partner up with and create the multimillion dollar company Black Dragon Industries with. Also during this time Zack would host the yearly Konoki event the "Konoki Christmas Ball." This event brought peace to Seichi one night a year and included shinobi of numerous nations.
As an Elite Jounin Zack fought many battles. He lead an unsuccessful invasion of Nagare during their civil war early in his elite jounin career. He would later attempt another invasion, this time a little more successful a few years later. During the second invasion Zack actually single-handidly destroyed a portion of Nagare's famous wall defense. Years later after a change of heart and maturation, Zack would come to Nagare's defense to help defeat a group of attacking rogue ninja.
Two highlights of his elite jounin career included defending Konoki during Seichi's demon invasion and also fighting off 5000 demons at once. During the attack on Konoki by the demons, Zack would take down the leader Ra. He would eventually use Ra's armored skin to create a body armor for himself. He would also have a small part in the defense of Sato during their Demon Invasion.
Being a trusted and well-known shinobi of Konoki, Zack figured that it was finally time to look towards the future of his shinobi career. After many meetings and discussions he has been chosen to become the successor of Hokage Chiyo. As the Sandaime Hokage he has vowed to himself to usher in a new age for both Konoki and the land of Seichi.