(Jounin) Rose, Genesis Kyogre (Rikuhi)

[Orion]

Name: Rose, Genesis Kyogre

AKA: Klinge

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Height: 6'3"

Weight: 195 lbs.

Appearance:
Skin and body- His a white male with a slight tan and has a built body.
Eye color- Much like his brother, his right eye is yellow, but his blood line shows he has the Kyogre DNA which is why the left eye is blue.
Hair- short black hair which goes to the back of his neck, comes up around the ear and in front of the forehead, a very common hair style for males. One part in the front is light blue.
Clothes- Wears a black sleeveless shirt with blue belts the cross around the chest in a X. He has on black bell bottom jeans that are cuted on the bottom slightly up with three blue belts on the left leg with a black belt holding them up that has three blue leather bags on them meant for holding items and other things. He has on leather boots that come to his knees that zip up on the side and then have three belts on them to tighten them down, the top two cross over each other like an X with the bottom one going straight across. He has on a long blue leather jacket that comes to his feet. It has black shoulders on it and on the back has a huge black X on it. He wears a necklace with a panther claw on it with the name "JANE" cut into in.

Tattoos- On the right side of his chest he has a crescent moon tattoo with this statement wrote around it in a circle
''I was weak. That's why I needed you... Needed someone to punish me for my sins..."

Level/Rank: Jounin

Village: Ex-Hyouga, Lives in Rikuhi

Language: Hyougaan (Fluent), Rikuhuu (accent) Sati (Hyougaan accent), and Common with Hyougaan accent.

Style: Taijutsu spec

Main Weapon:
Ragnarok (Sword) - On his left side, sheathed in a silver, black and blue non-magnetic metal that the sword is made of as well.

Side Arms:
First aid Kit (The same you can buy at any store) - Leather bag on his belt
5 Blood Pills (In First aid Kit)
Four bandages - Leather Bag on his belt
A lot of Tic tacs (Orange flavored) - Leather bag on his belt

Element: Fire and Water

Physical Strengths:
-Excellent Strength
-Excellent Stamina
-Great Speed
-Great Agility (+1 tier higher increase to excellent)
-Great Endurance

Physical Weaknesses:
-Ab. Horrible Poison resistance (x3 Post Duration, No Activation times, Enhanced Symptoms)
-Horrible Chakra Control
-Horrible Bleeding (Even though he can take a punch to the face and laugh, getting a cut may cause a problem. Though he doesn't have a medical reason for why, it gets bad at times)
-Horrible Throwing ability
-Bad Stealth
-Very Bad Elemental Weakness: Affected a bit more by any elemental jutsu that hits him with extra damage.

Mental Strengths:
-[Excellent] Pain Tolerance
-[Excellent] Reaction Time
-[Great] Sword Skills
-[Good] Knowledge of Fighting

Mental Weaknesses:
[Bad] Stubborn
[Bad] Pride
[Bad] Short-Tempered
[Bad] Overreact (Tends to overact to the simple things, sometimes even going the long or hard around something when a simple action would do)
[Horrible] Weakness to Genjutsus (+2 Genjutsu Post Duration, +2 Post Kai Delay)
[Bad] ADHD (While he is great on fighting and focusing in it... he can't but help and look at things and make comments on things while he should be focusing on ther things)
[Very Bad] Patience (He is just unable to hold to one spot for to long, he rather be in the action then anything else)

Jutsu:
Jounin >> 23 Jutsu: [5 E/D + 6 C + 7 B + 4 A + 1 S]
Specialest >> 3 E/D or 1 C (3 E/D ranks)

8 E/D Ranks

Inner Focus
Rank: E
Requirements: none
Description: This taijutsu is a result of physical conditioning, making the body resistant to techniques the user performs that would normally cause them nausea or dizziness, such as Tsuuga (Piercing Fang)

Battou [Drawing Sword]
Rank: D
Requirements: Sheathed sword.
Description: This is simply drawing a bladed weapon out of it's sheath. But it's done at a speed where the hand seems like an afterimage. It a technique derived from first strike sword styles.

Battou Saya [Drawing Sword Scabbard]
Rank: D
Requirements: Battou
Description: After the use of Battou, the attack is followed by a slash using the scabbard. It's a simple but seemingly effective and clever technique, but it's done at a speed where the hand seems like an afterimage.

Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu)
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The user is able to see light without it being bent by water. This allows them to see through a mist, or to the bottom of a pond.

Katon: Kemuri Shiryoku no Jutsu [Fire Release: Smoke Sight Technique]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: After using a few handseals, the user focuses chakra to his or her eyes. This allows the user to see through smoke, no matter the color or thickness of said smoke. However, smoke will still make the user cough and eventually cause suffocation, so one must be careful using this jutsu.

Battou Senkou [Sword Drawing Flash]
Rank: D
Requirements: Battou
Description: After the use of Battou or another Jutsu that requires Battou, the user of this technique quickly re-sheaths the blade into it's sheath with speed equal to that of the speed in which he had used to attack, the sword appearing as nothing more than a flash before returning to the users sheath.

Ha [Edge of a Sword]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: This is a skill in which a bladed weapon is swung in a special manner. This skill allows for a sword swing to be seen in a blare of light. The angle of the blade is held so that the light bounces off the blade during the swing. This is mostly for blinding an enemy.

Karakuri Ken Tentou [Evade and Counter]
Rank: D
Requirements: Melee Weapon
Description: The user leaves themselves open for attack, but as soon as an attack is made the user flips over the target making a spinning horizontal attack at the target’s back with their weapon(s).

6 C Rank

Konoha Gufuu [Leaf Hurricane]
Rank: C
Requirements: Melee Weapon
Description: Using quickness and agility, the user will do a swift upwards strike with their weapon at their opponent or at a weapon the opponent is wielding thus knocking it out of their hand or grip.

Screw Attack
Rank: C
Requirements: Bladed weapon
Description: This attack can be used either jumping off the ground at a target in the air, or attacking from the air at a target that is on the ground. The user of this taijutsu will prop their weapon infront of them, and flip forwards, with their weapon aimed so that they spin towards their target with the blade. (Note: peircing fang rotates on the Y axis, and this rotates on the X axis, so to speak)

Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None.
Description: A ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the user completely in mist. Once used, there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu for both the user and their enemy. This is a perfect situation for someone who trains in the art of silent killing.

Genkiri [Illusion Blade]
Rank: C
Requirements: Blade.
Description: A skill used by genjutsu users. They will pump molded chakra from a genjutsu into a weapon. And the second the enemies eyes lock onto the weapon they may be trapped in the genjutsu. Afterward the genjutsu work like normal. For the weapon to be used for another jutsu to be used with the weapon it require a two post waiting period.

Magen: Jigoku Koka no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None.
Description: Jigoku Koka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu that causes its opponent to see a vision of a tremendous ball of fire that will descend from the sky to envelope the target. The victims of the jutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and will flee from their location to safety.
Post duration: 2 posts.

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7 B Ranks

Nikuyouyuu no Jutsu [Melting Flesh Technique]
Rank: B
Requirements: None.
Description: This will cause an opponent to feel and see the flesh on his bones slowly waste away. The look of this is will cause tremendous fear and pain, rendering the enemy useless in combat.
Post duration: 3 posts.

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Tatsumaki Dageki
Rank: B
Requirements: Melee Weapon
Description: The user focuses energy into their feet and then leaps up into the air, twisting their body and expelling the chakra so that they do a hurricane spinning type motion with their weapon(s) outstretched to attack the target repeatedly.

Side step
Rank: B
Requirements: Great Speed
Description: The user steps to the side so fast that it leaves an after image. The range of motion is limited to about 3 feet, and can only dodge attacks that could have been dodged by the motion anyways.

Zujou Suro [Overhead throw]
Rank: B
Requirement: A large object; both hands
Description: The user is able to carry a large object [depending on his strength] and hurl it making it travel at a frighteningly tremendous speed. It makes the opponent get caught off guard.

4 A Rank

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Ragnarok (Sword) - On his left side, sheathed in a silver, black and blue non-magnetic metal that the sword is made of as well.

Isshi Resshin [One-fingered Earthquake]
Rank: A
Requirements: None.
Description: A taijutsu technique that only the strongest ninjas can accomplish. With just one finger, the ninja can merely tap the ground and create an enormous split in the earth before them. Of course, with this strength, one finger could do more to the enemy directly, but this incorporates physical power and range into an attack.

Tsutenkyaku [Painful Sky Leg]
Rank: A
Requirements: None.
Description: This is basically just a kick down from the air, where the user (if gifted with an amazing amount of strength) uses their power to create an earthquake like effect and massive destruction to the surrounding area.

1 S Rank

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Background:
Genesis lived in his home country of Hyouga with his family and was always the one that was pushed hard to become great, while his younger brother Jane, was out casted. Minus the fact many things between the two were different, Genesis always looked after his brother when needed. Soon later, his brother went to school to become a ninja, while his brother stayed at home and looked after the family business. Jane then left the village and the Rose name was dishonored. Genesis knew he had to stop his brother and became a ninja, soon finding his love for sword fighting. He trained day and night to grow strong fast. He studied hard at school and lifted weights at night. Soon, his body was that of a fighters.

After a while, he had to leave to become a group member of genins and he was happy to do so. It was nice to meet new faces and they did great together. Sadly, unknown to Genesis, his brother was forming a group of his own to attack the villages and once they did, Genesis was unable to stop him. He was out classed by his power and lost the fight. Jane however would soon meet his end by a unknown end. Genesis returned home to find all of his items and stuff destroyed cause he was a Rose as well. After a long time of suffering from others blaming him for what his brother did, he requested to leave the village on good terms. After approval, he turned to Rikuhi as he heard someone moved from there to Hyouga, so he figured the flip would be fine as well.

He had to train for the change in heat from the frozen land and after a while, he did fine. He has now surpassed his brother in power, but his brother was the reason why he became stronger and with his brother now dead, he has to find a new reason. The sword user of the ages has begun his path and no one shall hold him back.

[Itamimaru]

Absolutely Horrible Immune System (x3 Post Duration, No Activation times, Enhanced Symptoms)

Work on your slots, if you're giving up a higher slot for a lower slot you need to say so and where and Tai Specs get 3 E/D tai or a C tai so look over those two ranks and work it out

[Orion]

Thought that was one Nin specs that got that? oh well added it in. Thanks ^^

[Itamimaru]

All specs get those slots for that type only, Genin Chuunin Jounin or just get a C at Genin instead, and look at your B-Ranks you've got a format problem

That Water Sight better be for your RPC and not the extra slots those are just for Taijutsus, try and separate your slots sometimes it makes things harder when you combine them

[Orion]

All specs get those slots for that type only, Genin Chuunin Jounin or just get a C at Genin instead, and look at your B-Ranks you've got a format problem

That Water Sight better be for your RPC and not the extra slots those are just for Taijutsus, try and separate your slots sometimes it makes things harder when you combine them

Oh cool. I remember that tai specs got the stat increase and something else like a free c-rank fighting style or c-rank item, but not the three jutsus. neat-o

Its not, I changed it around so it should look better.

[kyubichan]

Mental Strengths:
-[Excellent] Pain Tolerance
-[Excellent] Reaction Time
-[Great] Sword Skills
-[Good] Knowledge of Fighting

Mental Weaknesses:
[Very Bad] Stubborn
[Absolutely Horrible] Pride
[Very Bad] Short-Tempered
[Very Bad] Overreact (Tends to overact to the simple things, sometimes even going the long or hard around something when a simple action would do)

These don't balance each other out at all, for two reasons:

1. Excellent is balanced by Abs. Horrible, Great by Horrible, etc. - you know how this goes. Your mnin profile had balanced mental S/Ws.
2. Those weaknesses all depend on his personality as opposed to all of his mental strengths that are more than just personality issues.

[Orion]

Sorry I didn't add the Genjutsu weakness to it. See how that works for ya

[Orion]

La bumping this thread

Me bumpsta

[Decadence]

Well, nothing really sticks out at me as wrong with this app.

I would have preferred the appearance to be fleshed out a bit more, though. That's really the only thing that holds me back from offering a half-stamp.

[Orion]

Well, nothing really sticks out at me as wrong with this app.

I would have preferred the appearance to be fleshed out a bit more, though. That's really the only thing that holds me back from offering a half-stamp.

I added on to his look. If you want more, I'll gladly add some

[Kambei Shimata]

I don't think the mentals are balance. Stubborn and Pride could be one in the same and I don't see how they hinder you in battle. More battle mental weaknesses or lower your strengths.

Also, this is jounin correct? Write it out properly. Jo doesn't really work.

[Orion]

I don't think the mentals are balance. Stubborn and Pride could be one in the same and I don't see how they hinder you in battle. More battle mental weaknesses or lower your strengths.
I suck at mental I swear. Also stubborn and pride are and aren't the same, they work together most of the time. Pride is normally a team thing where you hate listening to orders and make the orders instead. Stubborn can get someone in trouble if they don't ever change their plans during a fight. I added ADHD since this can cause him to not focus during a fight.

Also, this is jounin correct? Write it out properly. Jo doesn't really work.
Me mememe lol ok no problem man. edited ^^

Comments in #FF0000 or more commenly known as Red

[Kambei Shimata]

*head desks*

I'm not sure if that made it better or worse lol. I'll need a second opinion on the mental s/w. It might be balanced now but not sure.

I'm not so good with those either so I feel ya pain lol. Balancing those can be like trying to balance a sphere on the tip of a triangle lol.

[Orion]

*head desks*

I'm not sure if that made it better or worse lol. I'll need a second opinion on the mental s/w. It might be balanced now but not sure.

I'm not so good with those either so I feel ya pain lol. Balancing those can be like trying to balance a sphere on the tip of a triangle lol.

You have no idea how bad I want to try that now...

[Itamimaru]

Okay at first glance your weaknesses are stronger than your strengths but what needs to be taken into consideration is what stats are combat related and which are just situation prone those aren't very potent to affect you or if they affect combat at all.

From what I can see your strengths are all combat related so you need to make sure your weaknesses are too but some are iffy at best, genjutsu weakness is just fine though I'm not sure on your pride as a very strong stat you may need to explain how it would affect you but as it is its not very helpful at balancing, your ADHD and short temper are fine just get someone to comment on the first one I'm not sure but it seems good enough for balancing, and as for overreacting I've got no clue really it looks good on paper but RPed I'm not sure

[Orion]

Okay at first glance your weaknesses are stronger than your strengths but what needs to be taken into consideration is what stats are combat related and which are just situation prone those aren't very potent to affect you or if they affect combat at all.

From what I can see your strengths are all combat related so you need to make sure your weaknesses are too but some are iffy at best, genjutsu weakness is just fine though I'm not sure on your pride as a very strong stat you may need to explain how it would affect you but as it is its not very helpful at balancing, your ADHD and short temper are fine just get someone to comment on the first one I'm not sure but it seems good enough for balancing, and as for overreacting I've got no clue really it looks good on paper but RPed I'm not sure

Look at the weaknesses and think about who I am since you know who I am in real life. It's me, to much pride, overreact to something simple, stubborn beyond hell, short tempered, with ADHD to back it up XD I can't believe I didn't notice that till you made your comment hahaha this is going to be fun.

[Itamimaru]

Well we ask for hell and hell finds us eventually

Anyway just have a mod look over each point as long as you can make at least four of those balance out your four combat strengths then there's not much to say

[Decadence]

Aaaaand that's the end of the spam, please, Itami..
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-So he has two different colored eyes.. Which eye is colored what, though?

-Could you give a little more about his hair style? "Short hair that comes to his ears" makes me picture something really strange.

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[Horrible] ADHD (While he is great on fighting and focusing in it... he can't but help and look at things and make comments on things while he should be focusing on ther things)

This weakness doesn't help Kambei's problem because you worded it to be non-combat related in the first sentence.

As for how you rated some of the other mental weaknesses - specifically Pride - they could certainly use notes as to how they effect this character. I really can't see how someone with Pride as a weakness without a modifier would be less detrimented by someone writing Absolutely Horrible beside it, so you'll need to explain why it's such a big deal weakness.

[Orion]

Eyes edited
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If you live with ADHD or ADD, there are to problems with it. One, you have a hard time focusing and two, once you do focus on something, you ignore the world around you. That is what it means. If he focused on protecting his partners, he might just let himself get hurt and fail the mission to save them.

Pride is pride. Pride of the fight, pride of your family, pride of yourself or something else, one that has to much pride can be blind to whats happening around them. It should be an auto-weakness to anyone that has tai spec cause fighters are all about pride.

[Itamimaru]

Pride is pride. Pride of the fight, pride of your family, pride of yourself or something else, one that has to much pride can be blind to whats happening around them. It should be an auto-weakness to anyone that has tai spec cause fighters are all about pride.

*Turns away and scratches head*

Are you saying your pride weakness is to all the kinds of pride because if you aren't then try specifying, people always say tigers are prideful creatures but it doesn't hinder them at least in human standards in some cases pride can be a motivation especially in combat that's the reason why I brought it up there are just so many varieties for that you may have to narrow it down to something that will be able to match absolutely horrible like saying pride in your own abilities sort of like being full of yourself with absolutely no second thoughts on what you are doing